Comments | yaoi_challenge: Tension Break (BusGamer, Kazuo/Toki/Nobuto)

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Tension Break (BusGamer, Kazuo/Toki/Nobuto)

Apr 20, 2007 23:22

“Bye Toki!” Kazuo yelled, waving enthusiastically at the redhead from the other side of the street. “See you later!”

Toki paid no attention whatsoever and continued on his way. Kazuo stuck his tongue out at his back.

“Fine jerk,” he groused, shoving both hands in his pockets. “Don’t say goodbye. See if I care.”

Nobuto looked amused by Kazuo’s ( Read more... )

recipient: bunsy_two_foot, eos, bus gamer, rare fandom challenge

Comments 9

das_nordlicht April 21 2007, 12:49:20 UTC

Yeah! Thanks very much! I love it! It's so rare to find some Bus Gamer Fanfics out there, this Manga is so delicious and it's so sad that it ends as a one shot. The three boys are damn hot. Great piece of pre-smut, would love to read how it goes on.

das_nordlicht April 23 2007, 05:48:37 UTC

I fell for BusGamer hard when I read it (and can only hope that Minekura-san decides to pick it up again one day - unlikely as that is).

*sheepish grin* I would love to read the next part too - just wish I could write it as well as I'd like! :P These boys certainly make me want to try though!

Thanks! Eos

mistressrenet April 22 2007, 13:16:07 UTC

Oh, that's excellent!

mistressrenet April 23 2007, 05:51:08 UTC

*grin* Glad you liked - these boys are a lot of fun to play with, and they all bounce off each other so well.

Thanks for the comment!

~Eos

anonymous April 24 2007, 03:52:40 UTC

*flails* this was absolutely perfect! i couldn't have asked for a better response to the prompt :) the characterizations were fantastic and the erotic made me totally not miss the dark at all. thanks so very much!!!

cleflink April 24 2007, 16:09:51 UTC

*grin* So glad you liked! One of the things I love about these guys is the way Minekura does their dialogue so I really enjoyed being able to mess with that aspect of their interaction.

And yeah, sorry about the not-dark thing, but Nobuto insisted on being irreverent and I figured it was better to just roll with it.

Thanks!

~Eos

bunnyfetishist September 15 2007, 06:03:35 UTC

Such a good fic!!! Its hard to find bus gamer fanfiction but....*pout* It ends when its getting good....Q_Q

cleflink October 8 2007, 17:31:10 UTC

Ack! Sorry I didn't see this sooner - one of the problems with anonymous fic posts.

Thanks very much! I love the interaction between these three, especially in how well they fit together despite their differences. And if I had any faith in my ability to write the rest decently, this would have been a much longer fic :P

~cleflink (aka Eos)

nathcoelho November 22 2009, 04:49:36 UTC

that must have a second part!
omfg
love it! =)