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Undertow (Antique Bakery, Tachibana/Ono)

Apr 20, 2007 22:15

Title: Undertow
Antique Bakery - Ono/Tachibana
Author: Yowaki (aka devikun)
Recipient: Prestidigitator (aka miang)
Rating: NC-17
Words: 7000 (approx)
Warnings: The following fic is: a) overly long! b) quite flawed c) angsty d) not that true to the prompt e) all of the above
Summary: Tachibana is trying to fight the undercurrents in his life, but in ( Read more... )

yowaki, antique bakery, recipient: prestidigitator, rare fandom challenge

Comments 17

misura April 21 2007, 08:49:47 UTC

Gorgeous and totally delish - this read like it could have been taken straight from the manga (well, the not-NC-17-rated parts did, at least). I loved your portrayal of Tachibana, especially - he seems like a really hard character to nail, and to get him hooked up with Ono in a believeable way ... wow. Humor, sexiness and Angst all rolled into one yummy recipe.

devikun April 24 2007, 23:29:11 UTC

Ah! Thankyou very much! Actually, Ono was harder to nail in this one, but that was mostly because I knew from the start what I wanted to be saying about Tachibana; the challenge always is actually getting it to come out right. I'm very glad you enjoyed the fic!

anonymous April 21 2007, 20:10:22 UTC

asdsafdfsdafsdaffasd;;;;;;

That does it, fandom's over. I don't think there's going to be better Antique Bakery fic than this. I'd find a better way to convey how thoroughly amazed I am by your work, but I'm still a little too blown away by it!

I apologize for the late comment, by the way; from the warning about how long it is, I wanted to wait until I had the time to sit down and read it and not be distracted or half-asleep, and God, am I thankful I did. You, sir or madam, are a true master of the arts. Thank you so, so much for being the one to pick up my leftover prompt.

~ prestidigitator

I would have maybe picked c) in your multiple-choice test, by the way; I'd argue pretty strongly against the other answers. :)

devikun April 24 2007, 23:30:39 UTC

Oh, I wouldn't go so far as to say that, but thankyou for your enthusiastic response! No need to apologise for putting time aside to read such a long fic. I'm very, very glad you liked it!!

hieronymousmosh April 24 2007, 22:56:24 UTC

This was absolutely gorgeous. Just: &hearts
I'd also like to thank you for picking up prestidigitator's leftover prompt :p

devikun April 24 2007, 23:32:44 UTC

You're very welcome! I feel quite deeply about Tachibana; and it's sometimes frustrating when you can't say everything you are trying to about a character. I'm really hugely glad you liked what I did manage to say!

sunfalling April 27 2007, 07:20:25 UTC

Wow. I think this is the first really good Antique Bakery smut I've seen. You really know these boys and you had them go through everything I hoped for: the angst, the obsession, the denial, the sex... Thank you for your work.

madonmercury June 1 2007, 06:05:45 UTC

Hdofigdhog... I can't think... but uh... my hands are... shaking... and my mouth is dry... and you don't even want to know what's going on in my pants right now. (Well, I guess you know now.) Perfect. Wonderful. I wanted these two together so badly, and the subtext and ambiguous ending of the manga just wasn't enough... ohhhhmygod. Somehow I have to uncross my legs and get out of this chair to go to bed, but that may take me several hours. You're... my hero. +gushes... with love, I mean+ Keep writing forever.