Waking Dreams (Weiss Kreuz, Schuldig/Aya)

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Title: Waking Dreams
Fandom: Weiss Kreuz, Schuldig/Aya
Author: Tempest (rhosyn_du)
Recipient: Tanit (daegaer)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: What you need isn't always what you want.

Comments

[ranalore]

Oh, I like this. There's a sharp, merciless elegance to it, and it gets that dysfunctional need that I see between the characters in the canon. Nicely done.

[rhosyn_du]

Thank you. I struggled with how to express that need from Schuldig's end, so I'm really glad it came across.

[anonymous]

Wonderful! Thank you!

I love the meddling and the sharply drawn unhappiness of poor Aya who gets neither what he wants nor what he needs. Such a well-written story! Thank you again!

Tanit

[rhosyn_du]

You are very welcome. I had a lot of fun writing it.

[mainekosama]

Very good! So right and I think it perfectly describes the (long distance :p) relationship between those two. I loved it from start to finish.

[rhosyn_du]

Thank you!

[lirren]

Excellent work. The interactions between these two is wonderful here.

Schuldig watched the rise and fall of her chest, the slight tremor of her eyes beneath their lids, and let her sleep in peace.

There would be plenty of darkness waiting when the girl woke.

Those lines really run a wide range with me, from "gee, that's kind of sweet" to "damn, that's kind of creepy" all at the same time. *grin*

[rhosyn_du]

Oh, yay! That was exactly what I was going for with that part. I'm so glad it worked.

[kinsugi]

It stroked his mind like a lover's fingers, provocative and insistent. And, Besides, it would be a pity to waste such exquisite suffering. These lines sent a chill through me. Sometimes we forget that cold, hard core of people who survived Rosenkreuz.

[rhosyn_du]

Schuldig's creepy side is part of what makes him such an appealing character, I think.