So! notes!! first of... fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! It's so good! it's so fucking good! I love it so much *unf unf unf* I want to make love to it! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 The first part is as good as I remember it ;D As I see you used as one of my comments later on, I'm a bit surprised it went so smoothly, but i'm really happy about it =3 ~ I can't remember if I commented on this before but when you have me saying: “I know that. I do. But do you know him well enough to say that he’d never try to force himself on you? Because I’m not gonna give him that chance.” I can't stop myself from thinking 'exactly like I did! >: D Good that there was no one around to protect you from me when I made you my target~'' damn it would have been annoying having to battle down some idiot to get my hands on your sweet little ass! But overall that first scene is so beautiful. The whole idea about not really having to say anything but looks and silent touches can be enough... just screams soul mates to me =3 <3 <3 <3
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I can't stop myself from thinking 'exactly like I did! That’s because you’re speaking from personal experience XDDD just screams soul mates to me =3 <3 <3 <3 <333 That’s us. =3 So, now that you've seen what it's like on the other shoes, are you the same just 'less royal-cool'? =3 Well, duh. Can’t you see how frantic I am? =P mostly cause I can keep my eyes glued to your lovely backside <3 That’s just so you. But yeah, I prefer you chasing after me as well. I’ll wriggle my ass more for ya next time you chase me. =3 Instead of going straight for the groin, it goes to the heart and without you really noticing when it suddenly got you squirming in your seat having to deal with a very tented pair of boxers~ I love writing like that and getting to people in a surprise attack. =3 I like being sneaky. It’s the new kind of porn. It’s love Mar. Love I know! I felt it soo deep and had such a clear image of this in my head as I wrote it! I love moments like that. Gets me every time. xD xD and the ‘ow’ in the last sentence is priceless.
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Yeah, you already got this note once, but you need it again *dies as his face split in two from laughing too hard* Seriously, that padawan/master thing has me cracking up so hard yu don’t believe it. I have no idea where it came from that I’m suddenly using SW lingo, but I’m liking it very very much. In fact, I might just start calling you my little padawan =P if only just to hear you call me Master over again <3 <3 I love having you where I want you <3 <3
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padawan Actually I think I saw a funny pic/comment to a pic somewhere saying „blah, blah.... young padawan.” And it just stuck to me and I had to use it somewhere. I’m ecstatic you like it, ya know. I love making you laugh. =3 Master~ ! It’s because you don’t want me to be all over you with my hands during those slow, sexy dances where you grind up against each other. Well, duh. XD Obviously. *goes on about hips forever* *takes notes to use his hips against King* it’s the best chapter of them all in the story You say that with every new chapter. XD Make up your mind! at least I think it’s longer By 500 words, yes. I kind of consciously make them longer each time now. . I love it when you write these romance comedy parts Ya know, I kind of thing we were made for romance comedy. =3 Or the other way around. The genre was made for us.
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The first part is as good as I remember it ;D
As I see you used as one of my comments later on, I'm a bit surprised it went so smoothly, but i'm really happy about it =3
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I can't remember if I commented on this before but when you have me saying:
“I know that. I do. But do you know him well enough to say that he’d never try to force himself on you? Because I’m not gonna give him that chance.”
I can't stop myself from thinking 'exactly like I did! >: D Good that there was no one around to protect you from me when I made you my target~'' damn it would have been annoying having to battle down some idiot to get my hands on your sweet little ass!
But overall that first scene is so beautiful. The whole idea about not really having to say anything but looks and silent touches can be enough... just screams soul mates to me =3 <3 <3 <3 ( ... )
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That’s because you’re speaking from personal experience XDDD
just screams soul mates to me =3 <3 <3 <3
<333 That’s us. =3
So, now that you've seen what it's like on the other shoes, are you the same just 'less royal-cool'? =3
Well, duh. Can’t you see how frantic I am? =P
mostly cause I can keep my eyes glued to your lovely backside <3
That’s just so you. But yeah, I prefer you chasing after me as well. I’ll wriggle my ass more for ya next time you chase me. =3
Instead of going straight for the groin, it goes to the heart and without you really noticing when it suddenly got you squirming in your seat having to deal with a very tented pair of boxers~
I love writing like that and getting to people in a surprise attack. =3 I like being sneaky. It’s the new kind of porn.
It’s love Mar. Love
I know! I felt it soo deep and had such a clear image of this in my head as I wrote it! I love moments like that. Gets me every time.
xD xD and the ‘ow’ in the last sentence is priceless. ( ... )
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*dies as his face split in two from laughing too hard*
Seriously, that padawan/master thing has me cracking up so hard yu don’t believe it. I have no idea where it came from that I’m suddenly using SW lingo, but I’m liking it very very much. In fact, I might just start calling you my little padawan =P if only just to hear you call me Master over again <3 <3 I love having you where I want you <3 <3 ( ... )
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Actually I think I saw a funny pic/comment to a pic somewhere saying „blah, blah.... young padawan.” And it just stuck to me and I had to use it somewhere. I’m ecstatic you like it, ya know. I love making you laugh. =3 Master~
! It’s because you don’t want me to be all over you with my hands during those slow, sexy dances where you grind up against each other.
Well, duh. XD Obviously.
*goes on about hips forever*
*takes notes to use his hips against King*
it’s the best chapter of them all in the story
You say that with every new chapter. XD Make up your mind!
at least I think it’s longer
By 500 words, yes. I kind of consciously make them longer each time now.
. I love it when you write these romance comedy parts
Ya know, I kind of thing we were made for romance comedy. =3 Or the other way around. The genre was made for us.
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