For King
Happy anniversary! Happy V-day! And the Year of the Tiger!
I love ya King and I keep accelerating and I don't want to ever stop. You're the best thing that happened to me in my life.
About the gift. I planned for it to be something else. Then I got hooked up in Cheongsam, but smut appears not to be my thing. SO this is what was born. I think that it ( Read more... )
I love ya King and I keep accelerating and I don't want to ever stop. You're the best thing that happened to me in my life.
About the gift. I planned for it to be something else. Then I got hooked up in Cheongsam, but smut appears not to be my thing. SO this is what was born. I think that it ( Read more... )
So not what I expected (Don't know what I was expecting, but not that at least xD)
I love that you used this plot. I've had my fair share of daydreams of how things would go down, but this was sweet! And even your emo-muse couldn't stand in the way of a happy, pervy ending!
I already read the story twice over, cause there's a few favorite things I'd like to point out. And it also makes it a lot easier to tell you why I EFFING LOVE THIS FICCIE! *ahem* They are in order, but were written both as I read it the first and second time, so some of them I know what's going to happen and others not.
We talked about the "The first sentence needs to grap the reader", well it did! Good job =D Perfect for catching my attention, cause I was all "Is he complaining to me or about me? Darn, I sure as hell hope there's not another pervert after my Kitten's ass!"
The glare vs stare was fun too. A really nice comic input, am gonna remember that tech for sure!
I do have a thing for him
Oh yeah baby xD Admitting it already makes my job so much easier =p Now I just need to stay away from your emo muse.
It looked like he was deep in thought
Yeah, more like undressing you mentally. I can do that with a serious expression!
Will he still like me
EMO ALERT! Yeah, but I'm not afraid cause I know I'm gonna get ya ♥
And they gradually became closer which scared the shit out of the claret head
One of my favorite sentences, it just says so much about my little virgin Kitten
didn't respect personal space and kept invading his bubble
Invading your bubble is just an easy way to get you flustered, having your breathing increased and whatnot =P Besides, personal space is to be shared with your lover, so it's only natural for me to invade it even if the relationship hasn't gone that far yet xD
Stalking comment and answer = ♥
About this. You and me. The only thing you care about is me resisting you, the challenge. It's all that matters to you. It doesn't even have to be me!”
Says who?!? Go away emopress, I want to grope Mar.
All done. I was cheering though the last bit, but there was so much I was smiling at I would end up quoting the whole thing xD
Thank you for this fantastic fic, Kitten ♥ Made me really happy :3 Cant wait for you to get more writing-time!
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I'd like for it to be longer, with more twists and comedy, but I was late already and my muse was rather tired (I let her get lazy and now she doesn't like wroking for too long) and I'm making excuses...
I'm really, really happy you like it Tiger ^^.
First sentence? Haha, now I want to write a jeallous-fic XD
I used that tech a few times already, I like it ^^.
I say the emoness did well in this! Since it was still the origins of KM. I had a long way before me.
Hm, since I wrote the start this year it means for next year I'd have to write the first anniversary? XD
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Balloons? Have I been sleeping while you mentioned this, cause it's not something I remember xD Did you find any occasion worthy of gifting? How about first climax together? xD
I'd love for it to be longer also xD But I guess the flashback thing would be a good part to write in a fic by itself too.
Jealous fic? Be my guest xD Though honestly I'd do my very best to handle problematic perverts trying to get close to you while you're not looking. No need to show you my scary side, ne?
Talking about sides, I think I would, instead of being worried and caring and brushing your tears from your cheeks, the part right after the sentence: "“Isn't it true? You enjoy teasing me because you know I'll say 'no'.” Maru cried" I'd be more likely to shove you against a wall and slam my hands on each side of your head, just to get you to snap out of it. Saying the same stuff, just with a more firm tone. Well, maybe not instead of, but while being worried and then the sweet part come in once you're levelheaded again.
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Yeah, it would. A bunch of drabbles about the beginning. That would be sweet ^^.
XD Do you know humon on dA? I kind of imagine you'd be like Niels when it comes down to all the pervs after you Kittens ass XD.
Hm, shows I still have to work on keeping King IC.
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IC? I think you're doing a pretty good job at that, I'm not even completely sure about my chara yet myself xD It's just more of a.. seme thing.. I think xD
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Thank you! I'm always a bit worried if I managed to keep you IC or not. *chu*
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Yeah, that's the hardest part about KM stuff, cause there's someone reading it, who knows if you managed to keep it IC or not. But yeah, as long as you go with pervert on my part, you're pretty close to nailing it.
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