King's Christmas Batch Part 1

Dec 25, 2008 21:47



Christmas Gift #1
Title: Devour
Prompt:  Enraptured
Position on King’s List: Demon/Priest-in-training & Demon/Human whose soul he wants
Genre: Horror/Romance
Pairing: obviously King/Maru
Rating: R
Words: 892
Warnings: first time writing ‘bout demons and priests; grammar as it isn’t beated; AU;
Claimer: I own Maru and King owns us both.

Devour )

maru, king/maru, king

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Royal Notes 1-6 freakinmi January 13 2010, 11:31:25 UTC
(thought you might as well have to comments here too)

1. Enraptured
Ah! Really nice, and it’s one of my favorite plots even =D I like how everything is going rather far into detail and how long it grew on you. I love absolutely everything in it, and the whole ‘I’ll defile you on the most holy place of them all’. xD I can‘t help this sentence that grew in my mind; “I’ll take you to a heaven better than God’s”. This is one of those stories I’d like written even longer xD

2. Delirious
Delirious.. just as good as delicious xD
Oh my, so rare! Maru is actually writing M-rated stuff xD and Its KM! absolutely lovely! And this is hot =D I’m still all fangirl with it comes to non-con or semi-non-con xD A very nice ending for the first part, I’m all hyper and happy cause for once I actually got something after a long part of teasing xD “got something” as in more ways than one =P
On a non-fangirling note, Demon/Human wise and why I find it kinky xD I’d think a priest might be going more along the lines of “is God testing me? And if that’s the case, what am I supposed to be doing?” “is God the right path?” “this path seems so much better”, and the whole deal is then about the demon stealing the priests thoughts about and prayers to God for himself, filling the heart of the cute human with corruption. In the end, making a holy man call out to someone else than God.
But then on the other hand it might as well - for a demon - be about throwing humans into despair xD and then magically emerge again when the despair is so dark it seems there is no god or savior at all.

3. River
Despite the angst, it’s soo cute =3 Honestly, when I wrote river I was thinking of river-sex xD Never would have thought of tears. Somehow I really like it though. There’s just something about it that makes me come back to it. Maybe it’s that confirmation thing, that am I am the sunshine in your life =P

4. Night
So, this was a short one. I honestly liked the first three much more than this one, mostly because this one could in reality be with anyone. Never the less, the emotion in it is awesome =D And it’s even got a real drabble length xD Could be a nice preview for a fic once.

5. Feral
I have no idea what WAish means, but I like it =D This was one of those that had me smirk-smiling all the way through, with a big chance of people avoiding me if they saw it xD It’s gorgeous. I want more xD The whole story =p I like the idea of a stray kitten too. Should be a hard task to tame~

6. Cry
Bathroom quickie, eh? =P NICE! I can’t help but think of this as being one of those times I just felt like coming by to do ya in school time xD But oh man, you’ve hit one of my best kinks with that one xD wait a minute while I go deal with this tent, kay? =P Definitely one of my favorites.

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