Comments | yamikonumber7: IT'S DOUBLEPOST TIME 8D

yamikonumber7

IT'S DOUBLEPOST TIME 8D

Mar 01, 2011 01:18

Seriously, I either abandon this journal or I spam it like mad. What the hell, self.

I have more bitty!Terra! I actually fell asleep twice in the middle of writing this one, so I'm afraid it's disjointed in the middle. Please, please beta the hell out of this one. |Db

( The day was sunny, the weather was warm, the market was still in full swing a little ways away, and Aqua had evidently decided that today was a good day to read outside... )

kh, writing

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fairytaledreams March 1 2011, 19:21:29 UTC

Cute bitties are cuuuuuuute eeeeeeeeeeee

yamikonumber7 March 1 2011, 21:33:02 UTC

Well I am glad you think so XDb

Did the writing and such look okay, though? No glaring errors or anything?

fairytaledreams March 1 2011, 21:34:46 UTC

I didn't actually notice anything. So I think you're good. It didn't even feel disjointed from where you fell asleep so XD I think you're good!

yamikonumber7 March 1 2011, 22:47:52 UTC

Oh good. XD I worry about that sometimes.

Also - one last question, and this one's more of a value judgment than anything else - I'm not beating you over the head with How Much Terra's Life Sucked, am I? I mean, a story about an orphan finding a home is going to be a heartstring pull simply because of its subject matter, but there's a line between "d'awww" and "you did that on purpose" and I'm not sure where I am in relation to it.

Read: KIA WORRIES TOO MUCH

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