Unfinished fic

[yami_samuraiflo]

It's been a while since I last posted a fic; recently, I managed to get around and actually continues and corrects a little with some help from kirin_saga a fic inspired by a plot bunny on the farm.
http://community.livejournal.com/tf_bunny_farm/199157.html#cutid1
It's unfinished and will most likely stay this way, but don't hesitate to comment. I would like

Comments

[sablin27]

I like this a lot. You touch on several complex issues in a very believable manner.

[autobotlover]

Really liked this. Brutal practicality. Would like to see more in this line.

[yami_samuraiflo]

Brutal practicality indeed. It seemed fitting to me. Unfortunately, I don't expect to write more in this universe, for I lack any ideas to develop it further. But perhaps someday I will. Perhaps...