PotC - Crimson Remembrance (1/1) - Jack/Will

Sep 15, 2005 12:44

Title: Crimson Remembrance
Author: yakkorat
Pairing: Jack/Will
Rating: PG. Maybe G. And someday I will finish the heavier stuff.
Summary: Five years after Jack's death, Will Turner reflects...
Beta: The endlessly talented fleurdiabolique
Disclaimer: They all belong to me!!! *maniacal laughter* *sigh* Time to check my meds again.
Dedication: To anyone who has ever ( Read more... )

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starrdust411 September 15 2005, 17:33:21 UTC
Awww. That's so sad. I always wonder what would happen to Will after Jack dies. After all, Jack is much older then him and medicine wasn't nearly as good back then as it is now.

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yakkorat September 15 2005, 19:56:29 UTC
I agree. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Love,
Julie-Rae

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veronica_rich September 15 2005, 21:12:23 UTC
Quite good language. It's an intriguing idea, that the ink could be washed off to run down to where Jack is waiting for them, and not something I would've thought of ...

And you gotta love Ana's lack of tact, now and forever.

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yakkorat September 29 2005, 19:28:50 UTC
"Quite good language." It would be a great compliment from anyone, but from you, it is an accolade to pride myself upon. You have no idea how happy those three words (from you of all people) made me.

I liked the imagery there, with the ink flowing down to Jack. It's kind of what happens if you submerge a page with ink that's still wet in water. Especially old fashioned ink.

Ana = blunt as a head trauma. Love her. Always.

Thank you SO much for commenting, Veronica. I miss you so much.

Love,
Julie-Rae

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andiebean September 15 2005, 22:21:47 UTC
I've never commented on your writting before, but i thought that i needed to tell you you are amazingly good at it! love you! miss you!

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yakkorat September 29 2005, 19:31:27 UTC
Thank you so much. You have no idea how much it means to me to have someone in my family actually acknowledge that I'm good at something. And thank you so much (SO much) for taking the time to read this. I appreciate it. *hugs you tight*

You've always been the tie that holds us together. You know that, right?

Love,
Julie-Rae

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yakkorat September 29 2005, 19:32:35 UTC
I always said that you don't get over a love like that. You move on. You live your life. You may even fall in love again. But you never get over losing the one you love.

Thanks for taking the time to comment, hon.

Love,
Julie-Rae

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yakkorat September 29 2005, 19:34:42 UTC
Sorry to have made you cry. I'm glad you liked it though. Thank you for letting me know that it struck the right emotional chords.

Love,
Julie-Rae

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