questions

Aug 17, 2008 14:03

I did it! I finally finished a very awkward scene in Quiet Celebration I had in mind an idea for a conversation between Relena and Trowa, but it was proving more difficult to write, given similar conversation that have already happened. I'd tried several different takes on how Trowa could approach Relena's arguments. None of them sounded right, I think I've finally settled in on something that works.

Still there is one part of the conversation that works in my mind, but could easily be seen as ridiculous or just not make any sense. So I'd like to share that part with you, and get your opinions on whether or not it makes sense.

The former pilot sighed and Relena turned back to the window a shaking hand pulling through her hair. “The fact that you’re a soldier doesn’t change anything about you. I fought too.”

“Call it a tightly held conviction,” Trowa said finally, she could feel him watching her but refused to look over. “How strongly do you believe in pacifism?” he asked.

“That’s hardly the same,” Relena began shaking her head.

“How is your total faith in a non-violent approach, different from Heero’s complete belief that you should live?”

I'd really like to continue working on the story, but I'm not really sure where to go from here. I have what I believe is going to be the final scene in mind, but that's it and I'm not sure if it'll be enough to give the story a good ending. I may end up writing it and seeing if anything comes of it, I can list the number of times that's happen. *fingers crossed* I'd really like to finish this story, I've already got another fic in mind this time it's Stargate Atlantis/Doctor Who

doctor who, stargate atlantis, good times, writing, questions, fic, gundam wing

Previous post Next post
Up
[]