Waaaaah! *dies of story-awesomeness* You have no idea how much I love you right now. Seriously, the best C/R piece you've written so far. Both Reiko and Julie just seem so real.
"We are not. We just...get along well."
"Sure. Last time I "got along" that well with a man I made him my third husband."
*rofl* Oh, and the last 8 lines are just epic! I mean it, especially the "His wife's eyes are blue, aren't they?"
No dying! Can't have ya dying! I am so glad you like it cause I got the idea and thought "oh that's too cheesy" but it just wouldn't leave me. Very glad to hear it did you justice!
No idea where Julie came from but she was a blast to write, heh. I think my snarky side just came out.
lol...does that mean she needs to be drunk for that exhibition ? Or that she should get something out of spending her Friday there ?
...ok, you answered that (yes, I'm typing things while I read ;D)
Julie is a really good agent...she seems to know Reiko well...and wants her to choke apparently :D At least she didn't say "I told you so" at the end there when Reiko wanted another drink...Why does SHE know what colour Carlos' wife's eyes are ? :D
I love how Carlos is somehow very present in the story without being there.
Lovely stuff :D:D:D Subtle yet not (I don't know how to describe it, sorry.)
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"We are not. We just...get along well."
"Sure. Last time I "got along" that well with a man I made him my third husband."
*rofl* Oh, and the last 8 lines are just epic! I mean it, especially the "His wife's eyes are blue, aren't they?"
*dies some more*
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No dying! Can't have ya dying! I am so glad you like it cause I got the idea and thought "oh that's too cheesy" but it just wouldn't leave me. Very glad to hear it did you justice!
No idea where Julie came from but she was a blast to write, heh. I think my snarky side just came out.
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lol...does that mean she needs to be drunk for that exhibition ? Or that she should get something out of spending her Friday there ?
...ok, you answered that (yes, I'm typing things while I read ;D)
Julie is a really good agent...she seems to know Reiko well...and wants her to choke apparently :D At least she didn't say "I told you so" at the end there when Reiko wanted another drink...Why does SHE know what colour Carlos' wife's eyes are ? :D
I love how Carlos is somehow very present in the story without being there.
Lovely stuff :D:D:D Subtle yet not (I don't know how to describe it, sorry.)
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I think subtle yet not works! Thanks bigtime, cause I know not a lot of people care for RPF.
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