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yaboiksar

Suffocate

Jan 18, 2011 10:22

Title: Suffocate
Pairing: Tony/2OFC, John Sheppard, Carlos Almeida, Rachel Almeida
Rating: PG-13 for a few f-bombs
SML Universe
Disclaimer: Not mine. *dreams*
Warnings: No real warnings. No Michelle in this one so if you don't like hearing about Tony and other women, then stay away. That's about it.

Summary: More SML backstory.

( Suffocate )

tony/michelle, au, sml

Comments 5

nick_stone22 June 8 2011, 03:06:59 UTC

No real warnings. No Michelle in this one so if you don't like hearing about Tony and other women, then stay away.LOL I think the only person who ever really whined about that sort of thing is long since gone from the fandom anyway. So no worries there ( ... )

yaboiksar June 23 2011, 00:41:27 UTC

Thanks bigtime for this. No one commented and I knew it might not be for everyone but I was definitely disappointed no one even tried.

This was a first for me, explaining things without one of the pairing being there. It's actually one of my writings I'm proud of.

So yeah, your comment means a lot. =)

jimkeller24 August 9 2011, 15:05:56 UTC

I don't care who they're screwing, as long as one of them's in the story, I'm good. :)

And I really like the Johnny Cash/June Carter-esque background here. After all, Cash was pretty much a pill-popping maniac whenever June wasn't around and that's pretty much the vibe I'm getting from Tony and Michelle in this story. It's like she's his June. ;)

yaboiksar August 9 2011, 15:18:43 UTC

Now that's a compliment. I love Johnny Cash and yeah, now that you said something, I can see the parallel. I didn't even mean to do that!

Tortured!Tony is one of my favs. Thanks for commenting!

jimkeller24 August 9 2011, 15:24:13 UTC

I didn't really know where that came from. Probably cause I watched "Walk the line" last night, I see Johnny and June everywhere now. They were probably world's most awesome angsty love-story of all time. How many times did he propose to her?