Writing Style!

[xypnise]

      So what I wanted to ask here in a post is what you think of my writing style. I basically would just like some feedback (for whomever is actually reading my original story) on what you think of it. Is it too descriptive? Not descriptive enough? Too long per chapter? Too short per chapter? Too long between chapters to be released? (I've been busy, but I can try to make it more frequent.) I just need to hear if everything's going smoothly or horribly I guess. Even if it's the latter, at least then I can see what I can do to fix it.

If everything seems nice to you and you have no complaints, that's awesome too! I really appreciate any kind of input. I just want to make sure there's nothing specifically "odd" with how I'm writing, since I've never done this sort of thing before.

Thanks for reading! Be sure to check out my personal site if you are interested in other branched off hobbies of mine. (: