Oh. I must apologize. I was under the impression that people who wrote wanted to get better at writing and know where they make mistakes and what other readers want to look for and read when reading other peoples' work.
I must apologize that I don't sugar coat everything I say to the point that all I say is, "It's perfect. You had great detail. The imagery was there." especially when some of those aspects are not there.
I don't want to start bitching either. I think you're looking at what I said as some sort of insult towards the writer. I don't know who you are, how old you are, if you're in college; and if you are, what your major is. Mine happens to be English with a minor in TESL (Teaching English as a Second Language). I enjoy helping people improve their English and their writing whether they be native English speakers or foreigners.
I know that when it comes to commenting on someone's work you say what you like, what they did well at, and then you go into what they could have improved upon; and then also what you looked for (or wanted to see more of) in their piece as a reader (not as a teacher).
That is what I did. If you find someone trying to help another person improve his or her writing "douchey" or "bitchy" then I seriously think you will be unpleasantly surprised in college/University.
I don't care about getting trolled. If it's supposed to be an insult to me, it's not. I feel it's more of an insult to xxtsubasaxx. I was never one for caring about trolling. :P
Anyhoo! I feel that we've spammed her journal enough with nonsense. Find me elsewhere if you wish.
Lawl, it was never meant to be an insult, and honestly, I'm pretty much pressing buttons for the hell of it.
Also, yeah, agreed. While I'm sure this positively riveting debate is leaving millions speechless and in awe, neither of us care enough. Hell, I'm sure that in reality, you're not half bad. Either way, farewell?
I must apologize that I don't sugar coat everything I say to the point that all I say is, "It's perfect. You had great detail. The imagery was there." especially when some of those aspects are not there.
I don't want to start bitching either. I think you're looking at what I said as some sort of insult towards the writer. I don't know who you are, how old you are, if you're in college; and if you are, what your major is. Mine happens to be English with a minor in TESL (Teaching English as a Second Language). I enjoy helping people improve their English and their writing whether they be native English speakers or foreigners.
I know that when it comes to commenting on someone's work you say what you like, what they did well at, and then you go into what they could have improved upon; and then also what you looked for (or wanted to see more of) in their piece as a reader (not as a teacher).
That is what I did. If you find someone trying to help another person improve his or her writing "douchey" or "bitchy" then I seriously think you will be unpleasantly surprised in college/University.
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Anyhoo! I feel that we've spammed her journal enough with nonsense. Find me elsewhere if you wish.
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Also, yeah, agreed. While I'm sure this positively riveting debate is leaving millions speechless and in awe, neither of us care enough. Hell, I'm sure that in reality, you're not half bad. Either way, farewell?
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