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Alright well this one day in english class we were reading a story and i fergot my book and the teacher wouldnt let me share with anyone! so i wrote a poem.. now you see i cant write poems good.. i still do the last word rhymes way and it think i make the sentances too long so if ur gunna critize this poem please just tell me how to write it a better way not just like "that shit sucks" or sumthing..lol oh and this is a poem that i wrote about a "brown eyed angel" so read it!
Its been so long since i've seen you last
My eyes meeting yours like a blast from the past
We sat down for a while
Oh the way you got me to smile
In your arms God its been forever
I never thought we would get back together
When you kissed my forehead it made my day
How does someone effect me in this way?
We sat there in the darkness watching the screen
You said u missed me, but what does that mean?
If you missed me so much, why didnt u call?
That proves you probley didnt miss me at all..
The day you left,everything just seemed to die
everyday without you, all i could do was cry
Your name still lingers in my head
Each and everytime i try to go to bed
I took a chance by calling you today
I would of never thought itd turn out this way
Tonight was the best night in a while
First time all week that something made me smile
I didnt want the night to end
It was back to being just a lost friend
I couldnt help but look into your eyes
They said "im sorrys" not goodbyes
After you got out of the car
I didnt make it very far
A single tear ran down my cheek
Without ur touch, i felt so weak
That night i shut the door
I didnt make it to the bed, just fell on the floor
I just closed my eyes, i could not speak
I saw your face, god i felt so weak
I thought about the past
I really thought we were gunna last
I cried because this was the last time i was seeing you
I know i said it before, but now it is true
I promised alot of things to see you tonight
Maybe we'll run into each other, right?
I guess its true..
Everything i do, i do it for you..
You've always been there
When no one was here
Youve protected and loved me
You were all a guy could be
But most of all..
You always watched out for me
Its all so clearly to see
you are and always will be
My Brown Eyed Angel..