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[xxshammyxx]

“poisoned”

The sweet reminder that I’m still here,

Makes me want to die,
shoots me with a haunting fear.
Locks me in with a smile
then I slowly walk away
no love for my self image
I’m just one more person
fucked up and in the way

I feel your hand press on me
I feel the stress, its outstanding
it’s causing me to breathe

pick up your perfection
loose your

Comments

inspiration

[anonymous]

Where do you get your inspiration to write like this?

- Jenn

Re: inspiration

[xxshammyxx]

hmm.. feelings inside. i'm guessing.

Re: inspiration

[anonymous]

Just out of curiosity, are you suicidal in any way?
Either way, your poems are very well writen. They give across a feeling. I do not know how to decsribe it, or what the feeling is, but they do convey one. Not many writers can acomplish having both a well writen piece of work and have the feeling gotten with it also. You should be proud!

Re: inspiration

[xxshammyxx]

i'm suicidal in all ways possible.. yea sure lets say that.. i don't really care about my writing tho.. it's not like it's something a person like me could be doing for a life time career.

Re: inspiration

[anonymous]

What do you mean you are suicidal in all ways. What are these ways?
I'm just saying your a good writer, whether you choose to pursue a career with it, is up to you.

Re: inspiration

[xxshammyxx]

lol. yea .. i don't think i am suicidal.. i haven't thought about killing myself since like.. a week ago. or something. i don't know. but yea thanks for the saying i am a good writer. means a lot.