Right to See - Aoi/Uruha (1/1)

[xxshamisen]

Title: Right to See
Chapter(s): 1/1
Author: xxshamisen
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha
Disclaimer: Real people, real circumstances, fake stories.
Summary: What they had between them is like a flickering light - on and off, on and off.

Comments

[xxshamisen]

The song I posted kept popping up my iTunes. And then this idea hatched :/

Well thanks anyways~ ^^

[kouyou_x3]

aaah yuki why didnt ya say you've updated something? >__<
*jumps at you*

that was sad... it really was.
I hope Aoi will be able to see all of Uruha.
Q____Q
otherwiseit will leave him broken I guess.

It was beautifully written,dear <3
I just love your writing skillZzzZ

love
yuri

[xxshamisen]

LOL actually I did. 8D

Awww dun cry! >_<;;

Anyways, thanks Yuri~ ♥

[kawasakininja]

Sheesh, now I dont know what I was so afraid of. It actually wasn't too angsty for me, is something wrong with me?

I like Uruha being the closed one, not really giving himself into this thing they have. I'm not sure if it can be interpreted as coldness towards Aoi or just protecting himself from pain. Or just not not caring. I liked the fact that Aoi was scared, I don't know why, maybe better scared than hurt. I liked the theme of the flickering lights. Uruha standing across the street watching Aoi puzzles me, I don't know what to think of it. Obviously I can't understand Uruha too :) Not a happy ending for this one. But I like it.

Sorry for all the deleting comments.

[xxshamisen]

I might have overreacted in my post and scared you? xD

Yeah, not a very happy ending. I guess I should just stick to fluff, LOL.

Thanks~

[kawasakininja]

Yes, that could be it :) Angst with an unhappy ending seems ok to me. If you feel like writing it, just write it, why limit yourself only to fluff.

[xxshamisen]

Mmm, not that I'm limiting myself, but it's because I get carried away with angst to the point of tears? I don't want that, which is why I rarely read angst myself xD

But I guess I can always make up for that with crack, but it was late last night and I couldn't make some decent crack. >>;;

[calpico_sky]

This was really beautifully written <3
Though it's so much angst, I feel that I can really identify with it ...
Thank you :33

[xxshamisen]

Ah, thank you for that. I'm glad that you can identify with the things I've written here. :3