i love you Erica (11/?)

[xxlostitxx]

ERICA

I opened the door and walked into my house.  I called to see if Callie was home yet. I didn’t hear a reply and I opened the door to her room.  All her bags were gone.  There was no trace of her, except a photo that had been left behind of her and I, and the silver key that I had given her that morning. I pulled my phone out of my pocket.

Comments

[whitelder]

They really need to communicate a bit more, and Callie needs to stop taking things so personally and shutting her out. Erica needs to set her friend onto Callie to straighten it all out and Callie should not run back to Mark and use him as a fuck buddy like she did in the show to drown her emotions

[iluvcallie]

I've really been enjoying this story. It's pretty heavy, with Callie's instability and all, but at the same time writing it from the different characters' perspectives makes it a bit easier to read through without getting overwhelmed by the subject. I'm also getting frustrated with Callie's inability to communicate with Erica about how she's feeling, and vice versa. If they are really going to get Callie through this, they are going to have to be open and honest with one another even when it hurts.

You've done an excellent job with the topic and with this story. I look forward to reading more when you update. Great job.

[estellexo]

Wow, heavy chapter!! They really need to work on there communication skills. They need to open up, talk and be honest instead of jumping to conclusions and shutting each other out.
As hard as everything is for Callie right know, it must also be terrifying for erica to know that whenever something disturbs Callie, she's capable of hurting herself.
Great work, can't wait for your next update!!

[sapphicwarrior]

I really hope things get better for them soon... It's like they take one step forward and two steps backwards. You write it excellently though!
It breaks my heart to see Callie in this state.
Looking forward to more!!

[berlygruvr]

As said before that was heavy! But I kinda think I would react the same way Callie did. The Erica she knew would not be overly friendly with someone unless they were dating. So she was vague about where she was going and then turns up in a 'romantic' restaurant with another woman seemingly holding hands. Hm...I think I would have ran too.
But I hope Mark believes Erica and lets her explain things to Callie!!!
Loving that you are updating so quickly!! You rock!