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Sep 16, 2008 06:02

Title: Hauntings
Author: Me
Pairing: J/E Implied
Rating: PG
A/N: Written for blackpearlsails drabble prompt, Whisper.

Hauntings:

White. Everything is white.

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Comments 4

hippie_lover September 16 2008, 23:33:27 UTC

Beautifully angsty. I love it! The descriptions are gorgeous.

One little crit though, "whine" should be "wine" in the 3rd last paragraph.

xxiceyxx September 17 2008, 09:59:30 UTC

Thank you for the compliment and pointing out that typo. I hate it when I make stupid mistakes like that. >.

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xxiceyxx September 19 2008, 10:05:50 UTC

Thank you! :D Yes, poor Jack indeed. D:

phoenixjack September 21 2008, 04:45:55 UTC

Ooh, lovely :)

I love the part where he wants to not only kill her but kiss her until she's senseless. That's so Jack :)