Under the moonlight[3/7]

[xx69rabbit69xx]

Title:Under the moonlight
Pairing:haehyuk(main), Sichulhan
Genre:Drama,fluff?
Rating:PG-16
Warning: **!!!!mention of sex, bad word and violence!!!!**
lots of misspell and grammar error English is not my first lauguageT-T I used some check-grammar-online though...
how can I find person to beta my fic?="=

Chapter 3

Comments

[smilecoffe]

wah~
you update so fast :D
*fly to read* x3

[smilecoffe]

hate you D:
neh, don't let Kibum do that
I also like KiHyuk but I don't want they like this >"<
so let Donghae come in and save Eunhyukkie >~<
if no I will go to kill you XD

I know you will update soon but I still want say you update soon XD

[xx69rabbit69xx]

I love you;D

OH PLEASE DON'T!XD don't kill me!
well we see what happen soon;)

yeah I update fast because I have everything on paper already just need to type it;)
thank you for reading and comment<3

[dbsj0001]

*gasp* :O
how could you do that!and to hyukkie too!
bummie please don't do it! just stick to changmin!
poor hyukkie sad and lonely and scared and and ...
*cries* :((
you have to update soon!
-i hope hae saves hyukkie!

[xx69rabbit69xx]

yeah I feel sorry for hyukjae when I wrote it too;_;
Ohh,bummie!
I'll try to update as soon as possible!
thank you for reading and comment<3

[hyukhae4ever]

argh..... Donghae... come and save Hyuk...
hurry!!! can't wait for the next...

[xx69rabbit69xx]

hope donghae will com on time!*evil laugh*
thank you for reading and comment<3

[read0write]

OMG WHAT?!?!?!?!?

what is kibum doin to him? HOW DARE HE!!!!!
DONGHAE!!!!! SAVE HYUKKIE!!!!!

aww cute that they're slowly developing feelings for each other

but i don't like how this ended...kibum better not rape hyukkie...donghae better come soon...

what's going on? what's gonna happen next?

can't wait for next update :D

[xx69rabbit69xx]

YES!YES!HOW DARE HE!?
OH WAIT, I'm the one who wrote that xD
let's hope donghae will com on time!*evil laugh*
yeah they two are falling in love!and let's hope someone are not going to destroy it*evil laugh again*
thank you so much for reading and comment<3