Comments | xtremeroswellia: SPN/SV Fic: 2 A.M. (PG)

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SPN/SV Fic: 2 A.M. (PG)

Jun 28, 2007 21:02

Title: 2 A.M.
Author: X_tremeroswellian
Ratetd: PG
Pairing: None.
Characters: Chloe, John Winchester
Word Count: 425
Spoilers: Up through and including “Skin” for Supernatural and between “Aqua“ and “Thirst” for Smallville.

( 2 A.M. )

writing: general, when: 2007, fanfic: general, winsullivan

Comments 5

wander_lust_79 June 29 2007, 02:20:43 UTC

That really was freaking awesome..I love seeing fics with Chloe interacting with John its so cool... This is amazing... Yeah.. yeah... yeah... woot.. woot..woot.. I miss John!

xtremeroswellia June 29 2007, 02:40:08 UTC

Aww, thanks! :D So glad you liked it! I don't write John much because I never feel like I have his character down.

fonapola June 29 2007, 03:01:50 UTC

I know Chloe has Gabe, but I love the fics with her and John. He's much cooler :)
Loved it!

strangevisitor7 June 29 2007, 03:54:31 UTC

Nice. I like the idea that John is watching over the boys from a distance.

pen37 June 29 2007, 07:08:05 UTC

Wow! That was good. I love the gruff/fatherly tone that John has. I sense a good deal of respect and affection between the two of them.

Not bad. Settling into college life.”

“You like it?” His voice was quiet, uncertain.

I love that bit. It's like I can mentally see him thinking of Sam when he asks if Chloe like's college. And her response:

“Yeah, I guess so.”

Made me think of what JO said about not wanting to go back to college because there she was a freak with a knife collection.

And that made me think of how Chloe's first roomate moved out so quickly because she was freaked out by Chloe's wall of weird.

And now I'm all wibbly over this. Wow. Good story.