I NEED EVERYONES OPINION
So I need to submit a poem for English. I'll have a few in the later weeks and here's the first. If you could all please give opinions about them I'd really appreciate it.
K- I don't usually rhyme in my poetry which makes me nervous about this one so here goes:
Nevermind it's televised,
society feeds us what we need,
so sit back relax and you'll succeed,
this is our lovely society.
Do this that even the other just so long as we're all like eachother,
we're all just good kids in societies eyes,
bathing in the filth of societies lies.
HIT ME.
K- I don't usually rhyme in my poetry which makes me nervous about this one so here goes:
Nevermind it's televised,
society feeds us what we need,
so sit back relax and you'll succeed,
this is our lovely society.
Do this that even the other just so long as we're all like eachother,
we're all just good kids in societies eyes,
bathing in the filth of societies lies.
HIT ME.