Well, this was different, I like your Clara, but I kind of think the name is to close to Clark and to Lara, is a combination of the 2?? I like how you did everything, how she discovered the thing, how she made her choices, I love Jason :D, and I think this paring has future :D, I enjoyed reading it, be well and take care :)
I'm glad you like Clara! I didn't really intend to make her name be a combo of those two characters. I actually pronounce that first "a" like "chair" instead of "car". Her last name was chosen to make it similar to Clark's, though. ^^
I'm really pleased you enjoyed the story, and that you liked Clara (and Jason, of course)! Thanks for reading, and thanks for the comment!
Awwww, Clark and Clara are an adorable couple! Also, I love the choice of name--such a comic book thing to do. :D Your Luthor was also very realistically insane, and I loved the slow build-up between Clark and Clara. Nicely done!
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Lol, I'm glad you liked the choice of name. I used to worry that people might think it was cheesy, but... what can you say when the source of the story has names like Lois Lane, Lana Lang, Lori Lemaris and Lex Luthor? I'm also pleased that you found Lex realistic. I love his particular brand of insanity, and I tried to capture it.
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I'm really pleased you enjoyed the story, and that you liked Clara (and Jason, of course)! Thanks for reading, and thanks for the comment!
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Thanks for reading!
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