Lj Idol Week 10- Sticks and Stones

[xreesex]

He watches me when I’m sleeping; he’s kind of like Santa Claus in that way. I pretend I don’t know that he’s there, pretend I’m unaware of his face back-lit by the moon as I undress. I loved him, once, the way you love a beat up old blanket that’s been there from your first moment. It was a love that went unexpressed, a love I didn’t realize I

Comments

[we_got_caught]

Whoa.

[xreesex]

Haha, is that good or bad??

[we_got_caught]

Good. I really, really liked it.

[xreesex]

Thank you <3

[drjeff]

Wow, wow, absolutely wonderfully written and evocative. Beautiful.

[xreesex]

Thank you so much!

[imafarmgirl]

This is beautiful and sad. I really really liked it. I keep missing your entries every week for some reason. I need to remedy that because you're getting better and better.

[xreesex]

Thank you <3

[whipchick]

This is really lovely - your details are impeccable, I especially like the fire escape as a smoking lounge. One nit-pick, only because it broke my flow in this beautiful story - "alley". Great job.

[xreesex]

Thank you! I wrote this and submitted it right before the deadline, so I didn't revise as well as I should have! And thank you for the compliment!

[x_i_cherish_u_x]

Over the last 2 years, one of my top 3 entries!!!

[xreesex]

Wow, that's awesome! Thank you!