Lj Idol Topic: It's A Trap

[xreesex]

Comments

[basric]

What a great piece of writing. She sounds like she belongs on a soap opera. But you can in part understand her desperation for a better life.

Well done.

[xreesex]

I had been listening to the Cold Mountain soundtrack and thinking about lifetime movies for some reason when I wrote it, hahaha.

Thank you!

[spirited_grace]

There are so many different types of traps! Clever idea. Well done.

[xreesex]

Thank you!

[segunyo]

Reese I haven't even finished reading it but I just want to say, you're a great writer. I hope you're pursuing that somehow.

(silly auto-correct on iPhone)

[xreesex]

=) Thank you!

[x_i_cherish_u_x]

Loved this one too! I honestly didn't see the spin at the end coming. Wonderful!

[xreesex]

Thanks, love!

[rumplebuttkins]

Man, this makes so much more sense when you're not half asleep...

You know, what I like most about this is that in a very short amount of time, you really give these characters and this setting life. The revelation at the end doesn't even change my opinion of her as much as it just makes we want to know more about what comes next.

Very good entry!

[xreesex]

Sorry I forced you to read it while asleep, haha.

Thanks, lovey.