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[justspies]

I love you.

My God, this is incredible.

And I've got...415 words written. Go me. I am severely inadequate.

[xrebelheartx]

..i love YOU. Thank you so much, dude! And if you ever call yourself inadequate again, I'll fly to Florida and punch you in the throat myself ;) I'm heading to your journal right this second to read your work, love<3

[chili_powda]

I love this story. :) I have a big sister, but she wasn't as nice to me as Veronica, but it still reminds me so much of growing up with her. This is going to be great if I get to read a bit of this every day!

[xrebelheartx]

Thank you so much! You have no idea how much it helps just to know you're reading, and the encouragement means a ton, coming from someone as talented as you..thank you!!

[eolivet]

Duuuude!!! (Sorry, your dialogue has reduced me to incoherence. :D ) I can't get over how much your details enhance the story -- making someplace like even Dave's Lube Thru memorable. OMG, and the line about the girls' mother having instructions for use...absolutely brilliant. I cannot WAIT to see where this goes next!!! Pleeeease keep posting!!! (and wow, 5,000 words in two days...that's amazing!!! :D )

[xrebelheartx]

Ah, you are so freaking sweet to me..thank you so, so much! I'm beyond thrilled that you're enjoying it, and I can't tell you how much I appreciate the feedback. Thank you!