Obsidian [Remus/Regulus]

[xphineasx]

Obsidian Soul
Remus/Regulus; James/Regulus (Some Sirius/Remus mentioned)
Rated: T I suppose.
Summary: I see him in my dreams now, moving like a shadow with a wicked grin. Obsidian hair, obsidian eyes and an obsidian soul, he is beautiful, deadly and cruel. His eyes burn like tongues of fire when I watch him.
Remus can not look away from Regulus, but

Comments

[soleosolere]

Hi, there!

I've just finished reading your beautiful story and couldn't help it, I must write a comment.;)

It starts like a wonderful poem, I really liked the way you began this fic. You created the dark, hopeless atmosphere brilliantly. I like especially the unique way that you see the relationship between Regulus and the Marauders. (And there aren't so much Regulus/James pairings in the fandom.)

I'm also so happy about the Remus/Regulus pairing. It's my most favourite ship of all, and I'm always so glad when I can find some new fic with them.♥ It's so rare...*sighs*

Back to the fic...
You said that you had written this fanfic all at once. I read it all at once, too.^^ The story absolutely carried me with it, I could imagine all the scenes, the characters - you portraid them very well. I seem to hear Remus' thoughts, his desperate desire for Regulus, his love for Sirius and how this whole thing wear out him, the hatred for himself...

I'm so sorry that English isn't my native language, so I can't express my thoughts and my opinons better and more exactly.:')

But the main point is that that I liked your story much and wish you a lot 'walking alongs':) if you write some more fics of this kind after them. ;)

Bye!

[xphineasx]

I wanted to thank you for your wonderful comment. I really appreciate that you took the time. ^-^ I'm really glad that you enjoyed my story.