wow schiff, that brings a tear to my eye. No one is here to judge, but there is many mistakes in this passage.... not only, did thousands of .. it's alright we all make mistakes george, i mean alex. at least you got your point across, i dont want that happening again either. Cheers to America, long live freedom Jordan Richard Rothstein III
First, there is no "war in terror" maybe "the war on terror" or "the war in Iraq"
Second, you're asking the question "do we" in your conclusion which is first of all a ridiculous statement and second of all needs a question mark at the end of the question.
Third, waste is spelled w-a-s-t-e not waiste.
Fourth, God is always capitalized, respectively.
Also, you state "... our strength as a country was proven weak..." which is untrue, because during 9/11 our National Security and safety may have been weak, but not our strength as an entire country.
Please, before you post an entry about something so precious to the United States and very close to home for certain people, be respectful and accurate and not make a mockery out of an important event.
First: the 'war on terror' and the war going on in Iraq are two completely separate affairs. specifically due to the fact that one can't wage war on terror itself; whereas we actually are, or did go to war with Iraq.
Second: you're correcting her grammar while not being correct with your own. dick.
Third: god god god god god god god god god.
Fourth: the strength of our country is never written in stone. grasp that it is possible for people to have opinions different than your own.
now please, before you correct someone who is trying to be compassionate about an event that has affected us all (however grammatically incorrect they choose to do it) and call them disrespectful, take some time to see how much of an asshole you come off as by doing so.
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i hope it doesnt happen again ever
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No one is here to judge, but there is many mistakes in this passage.... not only, did thousands of .. it's alright we all make mistakes george, i mean alex. at least you got your point across, i dont want that happening again either. Cheers to America, long live freedom
Jordan Richard Rothstein III
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good try babe. :)
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God bless....
That was a really sweet entry! u have a big hearttt <3
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maybe "the war on terror" or "the war in Iraq"
Second, you're asking the question "do we" in your conclusion which is first of all a ridiculous statement and second of all needs a question mark at the end of the question.
Third, waste is spelled w-a-s-t-e not waiste.
Fourth, God is always capitalized, respectively.
Also, you state "... our strength as a country was proven weak..." which is untrue, because during 9/11 our National Security and safety may have been weak, but not our strength as an entire country.
Please, before you post an entry about something so precious to the United States and very close to home for certain people, be respectful and accurate and not make a mockery out of an important event.
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Second: you're correcting her grammar while not being correct with your own. dick.
Third: god god god god god god god god god.
Fourth: the strength of our country is never written in stone. grasp that it is possible for people to have opinions different than your own.
now please, before you correct someone who is trying to be compassionate about an event that has affected us all (however grammatically incorrect they choose to do it) and call them disrespectful, take some time to see how much of an asshole you come off as by doing so.
-this isn't david.
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people are so rude and immature.
honestly, who has the time to do that.
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im sorry, but NEVER comment on my post again.
i dont need unbelievably foolish people like you.
who cares how i wrote that.
who cares if its "gramatically" correct.
its the bigger picture buddy, obviously someone as ignorant as you wouldn't realize that.
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