"The Reds"

Sep 20, 2008 12:18

Title: Since You Been Gone (II out of II)
Chapter: 1.14 
Author: Read more... )

xabi alonso, fernando torres, daniel agger, steven gerrard

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xmrbrightside89 September 20 2008, 10:53:48 UTC
What can I say about this chapter? HAHA
Just that I wrote this while I was sick .___. yeah, laptop on my bed... and my head which was ALMOST EXPLODING...
Hope you like this even if I think it's a HUGE whole CRAP! .__.

Talking about the characters... well, Daniel will be one of the new ones... hehe hope you're glad of that!

Well... the title of this chapter... says it all I think...
In this chapter we see the different characters' reactions. Some seem feeling not that bad (Stewie... seems feeling good,is that true?) others... are just doing bad, taking pills and stuff (Daniel)... and so on...

I don't even know what to say about this... except that I'm so sorry for Dan ...and that LJ is a fucking shit... It kept saying me that the post was too large... ç___ç
so I had to split this in two...argh I HATE THAT!

BTW, I'll wait your lovely comments about this...
suggestions/critics/appreciations/quotes (that's just the apotheosis of HAPPINESS for me) are always so loved <3

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YAY! jennybunny_08 September 20 2008, 12:32:41 UTC
hahahah. you posted. AND DANNY IS IN IT. THANKKK YOUUUUUUUU.

err. i sorta skimmed through this cuz i was just soo excited. and so when i make sense, i'll leave you a better comment.
x

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Re: YAY! xmrbrightside89 September 20 2008, 12:43:52 UTC
Hey Hey!
Thanks for reading hehe
I KNOW, DANNY IS INNN! HAHA <3

I'll wait for a huge comment then :D
hehe

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Re: YAY! jennybunny_08 September 21 2008, 04:57:33 UTC
MORE s/x please. i cant stand it when they are fighting. its too much :/ hehehe..

well here is my 'longcomment' or atleast trying to give you a long comment you totally deserve.

waiit. is nando and stewie together? a bit confused whats going on there but they are soo cute giving each other gifts. nando can be cocky sometimes :/

YES PLEASE MOAR DANNY. DANNY = <3 and he so sad in the chapter... make him happyyyyyy. evol person.

OH, and and i cant wait till next ficc :)

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Re: YAY! xmrbrightside89 September 21 2008, 14:26:34 UTC
AAAW, I know that it's just so sad... and I don't want them to fight that way... =(
butttttttt................

No, no... actually I'll clear up that part on the next chapter... but I can tell you that they're not together... or better... they're not really a couple (NOT YET)
They just do the same things that a couple does, but still, neither of them is ready to start a relationship...
I don't know If you get what I wanted to mean...
The xmas presents... well, yeah... that part is so true and so pure... just too cute to be true <3
HAHAHA I KNOW, he's such an asshole sometimes...

“Uhm…” he took a pause “a box full of sex… toys and … stuff?” <--haha that made me so LAUGH hard

“It won't be that easy... chico” he shook his head and then grabbed Stewie's face... and kissed him.

“Mmm Is this a gift too? because I love this one so much...”
“I know”
“You're way spoiling me... you know right?”
“Yes...” and kissed him again ...
“And you can't stop me doing that...It's just me being mr. Torres”
<--haha COCKYYY nando <3 ( ... )

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