Beta reader needed

[deacertes]

I've got a little over 18,000 words of my entry done (11,000 words had previously been posted to a meme, so I've got to write at least 22,000) and I desperately need a beta reader. I know that some parts need tightening up and some parts need a little more, but I'm finding it hard to focus on exactly what needs what. I need a fresh pair of eyes. I also need someone who can point out grammar, ooc, continuity etc.

Can anyone please help?

Es.