Fill: Hole in the Wall 3/3, slight abuse, violence, rough sex
anonymous
April 12 2012, 03:41:28 UTC
Charles wraps his arms around Erik’s shoulders and runs his fingers lightly down Erik’s back. “Well?” he asks, fingers ghosting back up to Erik’s shoulders.
“Later,” Erik growls, grabbing roughly at Charles’ cock between them. Charles lets out a low noise that might be a growl or a moan and digs his nails into Erik’s back, curling up towards him, around him. The bite of his nails hurts and Erik winces at the sting, but all he wants is more.
After, when they are sprawled out across the bathroom floor and Erik is counting the newly forming bruises blossoming on Charles skin-finger prints on his hips, a dark, red line wrapping around his side from where he fell, distinct new marks on his neck-while Charles presses a wet towel to the punctures and bleeding scrapes his fingernails have left on Erik’s arms and back, the constant ache in Erik’s chest that demands possession of Charles eases slightly. He had been so angry before, and the anger that Charles had reciprocated with had driven Erik wild. None of that anger is present now, with Charles cooing softly every time Erik flinches and pressing soft kisses against his skin in the wake of the towel. This, Erik thinks, is perfection.
“Erik,” Charles says softly, a smile on the edge of his tone, and Erik squeezes his hip in acknowledgment. “Happy two-month anniversary.”
It takes a moment for Charles’ words to sink in, but when they do, Erik sits up and glares at him, his anger flaring back to life. “You knew?” he asks. “You knew this whole time?”
Charles is smirking at him and Erik is still having trouble catching up with this new information. Charles has known the whole night, has probably been aware of it the whole day or the whole week or the whole always, and he hasn’t said anything until now. He’d purposefully provoked Erik, that is the only explanation that Erik can think of.
“Sorry?” Charles says after a moment of silence, but he clearly doesn’t mean it.
Erik’s rage boils over. He slams Charles back against the cabinet under the sink and takes satisfaction in Charles’ pained groan and the way his eyes flutter as the door handles dig into his back.
“No, you’re not,” Erik says, lips brushing against Charles’ cheek, “not yet.”
/End/
Sorry there wasn’t real sex or if this wasn’t exactly what you wanted. I’d really like to see other people fill this, too!!
Re: Fill: Hole in the Wall 3/3, slight abuse, violence, rough sexsynekdokeeApril 12 2012, 10:59:40 UTC
Ooooh that is just the perfect amount of twisted, and the information that Charles intentionally riles Erik up is just an additional sprinkling of fucked up. They're gonna end up killing one another some day.
Re: Fill: Hole in the Wall 3/3, slight abuse, violence, rough sexgildatheplantApril 12 2012, 15:51:51 UTC
Oh man, so fucked up yet so hot! I love Erik's voice in this. Part of me wants Charles to run away really fast the other part understands completely why he doesn't.
Re: Fill: Hole in the Wall 3/3, slight abuse, violence, rough sex
anonymous
April 13 2012, 01:12:49 UTC
OP here,
There's no need to apologize, this was brilliant! It's twisted and intense and I absolutely adore how you wrote Charles, so manipulative and intentionally riling Erik. The last bit was especially good and sent shivers up my spine <3
Re: Fill: Hole in the Wall 3/3, slight abuse, violence, rough sextrop_dangereuseApril 13 2012, 03:19:09 UTC
This was fabulously emotionally intense! I loved it! They have such intense feelings for each other, but then you drop that it's only been two months for them, and they're just burning each other up with their feelings for each other. It really reminds me of the feel of the music video for "Love the Way You Lie". This is fantastic. I loved it.
“Later,” Erik growls, grabbing roughly at Charles’ cock between them. Charles lets out a low noise that might be a growl or a moan and digs his nails into Erik’s back, curling up towards him, around him. The bite of his nails hurts and Erik winces at the sting, but all he wants is more.
After, when they are sprawled out across the bathroom floor and Erik is counting the newly forming bruises blossoming on Charles skin-finger prints on his hips, a dark, red line wrapping around his side from where he fell, distinct new marks on his neck-while Charles presses a wet towel to the punctures and bleeding scrapes his fingernails have left on Erik’s arms and back, the constant ache in Erik’s chest that demands possession of Charles eases slightly. He had been so angry before, and the anger that Charles had reciprocated with had driven Erik wild. None of that anger is present now, with Charles cooing softly every time Erik flinches and pressing soft kisses against his skin in the wake of the towel. This, Erik thinks, is perfection.
“Erik,” Charles says softly, a smile on the edge of his tone, and Erik squeezes his hip in acknowledgment. “Happy two-month anniversary.”
It takes a moment for Charles’ words to sink in, but when they do, Erik sits up and glares at him, his anger flaring back to life. “You knew?” he asks. “You knew this whole time?”
Charles is smirking at him and Erik is still having trouble catching up with this new information. Charles has known the whole night, has probably been aware of it the whole day or the whole week or the whole always, and he hasn’t said anything until now. He’d purposefully provoked Erik, that is the only explanation that Erik can think of.
“Sorry?” Charles says after a moment of silence, but he clearly doesn’t mean it.
Erik’s rage boils over. He slams Charles back against the cabinet under the sink and takes satisfaction in Charles’ pained groan and the way his eyes flutter as the door handles dig into his back.
“No, you’re not,” Erik says, lips brushing against Charles’ cheek, “not yet.”
/End/
Sorry there wasn’t real sex or if this wasn’t exactly what you wanted. I’d really like to see other people fill this, too!!
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There's no need to apologize, this was brilliant! It's twisted and intense and I absolutely adore how you wrote Charles, so manipulative and intentionally riling Erik. The last bit was especially good and sent shivers up my spine <3
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