FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 6/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 03:58:29 UTC
His neck is arching away from Charles, and he can feel sweat running down his back. He's almost there, almost, maybe half a dozen strokes, he feels stuck on the brink and he can barely breathe-
"Fuck!" Charles' voice, broken and almost unrecognisable, and he can see Charles pushing his jeans down to his ankles, spreading his thighs; his left hand is back, fingers glistening with spit as they disappear low between his legs.
"Charles," Erik breathes out, watching him push his fingers inside himself; and then, louder, in a high, whimpering tone, "Charles!" as he comes, harder than he ever has, vision whiting out as he is swept away by a wave of pleasure so intense it feels almost like pain as it crashes over him, and crashes, and crashes, and it feels like it will never end.
When he comes to, it's to the sight of Charles hands moving furiously over his dick and between his legs; two, three, four strokes, and Charles comes with a wordless shout, spilling over his hands, and his shirt, and the bedsheet.
They just lie where they are for a while, after, out of breath and nearly insensible; facing each other, but looking at anything but the other's face.
Erik still feels dizzy; from the alcohol or the orgasm, he doesn't know.
One stupid porno, and now everything is - complicated.
When he feels he's about to drift off, he pushes himself off the bed and does himself up. He'll have to do his laundry when he gets back; for now, the worst of it will be hidden under his coat. He goes into Charles' bathroom with shaky legs and washes his hands.
When he gets back, Charles' trousers are up as well, and he's sitting on the edge of the bed. He still isn't looking at Erik. The room reeks of sex.
"I better get back," he says, because he doesn't know what else to do.
"Yeah."
As his hand brushes the doorknob, though, Charles calls his name, and he turns back to face him.
"See you next Friday?" Charles asks, with so much in his voice and on his face that Erik doesn't even know where to start.
Re: FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 6/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 05:47:10 UTC
omfg this is fantastic. the really-really-wanting-to and the no-it's-a-terrible-idea, ahhh! delicious tension and i love that you ended it with an unresolved but definitely promising note.
Re: FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 6/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 05:59:29 UTC
*fans self* Okay...DAMN.
I LOVED Erik's internal struggle and how it turns out he's so caught up in his own teen angst re: his feelings about Charles that's he's completely missed that Charles is into him, too.
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anonymous
February 29 2012, 18:36:00 UTC
Author!Anon here
Thank you! I'm sososo glad you liked it :D (Full disclosure: this was my first time writing full-on smut, not just UST. I was nervous.)
... NGL, I'm kind of dying to write the next friday. I've gotten surprisingly attached to the 'emotionally dense teenagers who wank a lot' version of Charles and Erik when I was writing this, and I want to explore them a bit more. Would you mind if I use your prompt as a springboard and keep posting here even though it's not technically a fill anymore? I just don't wanna deanon haha /slinks away in shame
Re: FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 6/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 18:42:45 UTC
Um, HOLY HELL. Now I need a sequel where Charles and Erik grudgingly admit that they're both virgins and go about deflowering each other to every conceivable sexual position over the course of a weekend, with nothing but junk food, beer, and a well-thumbed copy of the Kama Sutra to sustain them.
"Fuck!" Charles' voice, broken and almost unrecognisable, and he can see Charles pushing his jeans down to his ankles, spreading his thighs; his left hand is back, fingers glistening with spit as they disappear low between his legs.
"Charles," Erik breathes out, watching him push his fingers inside himself; and then, louder, in a high, whimpering tone, "Charles!" as he comes, harder than he ever has, vision whiting out as he is swept away by a wave of pleasure so intense it feels almost like pain as it crashes over him, and crashes, and crashes, and it feels like it will never end.
When he comes to, it's to the sight of Charles hands moving furiously over his dick and between his legs; two, three, four strokes, and Charles comes with a wordless shout, spilling over his hands, and his shirt, and the bedsheet.
They just lie where they are for a while, after, out of breath and nearly insensible; facing each other, but looking at anything but the other's face.
Erik still feels dizzy; from the alcohol or the orgasm, he doesn't know.
One stupid porno, and now everything is - complicated.
When he feels he's about to drift off, he pushes himself off the bed and does himself up. He'll have to do his laundry when he gets back; for now, the worst of it will be hidden under his coat. He goes into Charles' bathroom with shaky legs and washes his hands.
When he gets back, Charles' trousers are up as well, and he's sitting on the edge of the bed. He still isn't looking at Erik. The room reeks of sex.
"I better get back," he says, because he doesn't know what else to do.
"Yeah."
As his hand brushes the doorknob, though, Charles calls his name, and he turns back to face him.
"See you next Friday?" Charles asks, with so much in his voice and on his face that Erik doesn't even know where to start.
"Sure," he answers, and walks through the door.
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I LOVED Erik's internal struggle and how it turns out he's so caught up in his own teen angst re: his feelings about Charles that's he's completely missed that Charles is into him, too.
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And you worked in two of the bonuses! I couldn't have asked for a more perfect fill... this was SCORCHING.
God, now I want to see what happens next Friday...
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Thank you! I'm sososo glad you liked it :D (Full disclosure: this was my first time writing full-on smut, not just UST. I was nervous.)
... NGL, I'm kind of dying to write the next friday. I've gotten surprisingly attached to the 'emotionally dense teenagers who wank a lot' version of Charles and Erik when I was writing this, and I want to explore them a bit more. Would you mind if I use your prompt as a springboard and keep posting here even though it's not technically a fill anymore? I just don't wanna deanon haha /slinks away in shame
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... Oh.
I'm doing a sequel (probs a bit less PWP and more character-based, but still smutty) and I'll keep this in mind. Defo. Yeah.
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