Fill: Green Light, pt.2a_qSeptember 18 2011, 08:48:17 UTC
*** The tears did it.
Erik watched Logan with Charles, arms crossed and quiet, his eyes never leaving Charles. He contained himself through the whimpering, the begging and even out right screaming without patting an eyelash, but the moment Charles' bright blue eyes filled with tears, that was the moment he had to step in.
Logan was smacking Charles around, holding him steady with one hand and bitch slapping him with other. Logan hummed with pleasure, slaps getting louder on Charles sweaty, flushed skin. Without a warning there was tears, welling up and pouring down on Charles face and Erik moved before he could stop himself.
With a swift move he yanked Charles out of Logan's hold, which was easy because Logan hadn't expected Erik to intervene at this point. Why would he? Slapping was mild on Logan's scale of things. Charles seemed equally surprised from the sudden interruption, which made Erik feel even more tense and angry. Charles should've picked up his fear for his safety, but he hadn't.
“Hey! What are you doing? Hand him back!” Logan said, grabbing a hold of Charles arm. Charles hung awkwardly between them like a squeaky toy between two terriers.
“He is crying, back off!”
“Buddy, he always cries. It doesn't mean shit!”
Erik stared at Logan who stared right back, both willing the other to back down when it was clear that neither would. Charles sniffled, because he couldn't wipe his nose and the tears made it hard to breathe. He didn't say anything. Erik broke the staring contests and looked at Charles hanging in their hold, noticing how bright his eyes were, how he couldn't stop grinning. Anger flared in Erik's head, and he dropped his hold on Charles like his skin had suddenly turned hot.
“It doesn't mean anything,” Erik repeated, the realization dawning on him. He took a step back. “He really likes what you do to him.”
“Erik...”
“Lehnsherr...”
“Stop talking, both of you!” Erik said and turned his back to them. It felt like vertigo, the realization that he had understood this so fundamentally wrong. There was a sound of kissing behind his back and Erik glanced over his shoulder. They made a show for him, to placate him or to entice, he couldn't say.
“Wouldn't you like to join us?” Charles asked coyly.
“No.”
“Liar.”
Erik looked at Logan. "Your bitch called me a liar. You allow him to do that?"
"No, I don't," Logan said and nodded. "I'll see to it." The slap flung Charles to the floor at Erik's feet. He smiled up at Erik, before Logan grabbed his ankle and slid him back to him, picking him up like he weighted nothing and slapping him down again. "There. Remember your place. Something else you would like, Erik?"
Re: Fill: Green Light, pt.2a_qSeptember 18 2011, 19:35:15 UTC
Wow, that was awesome! And really nice that it was Erik centered. I love the end of the first part, so funny, yet describes Erik/Logan relationship very accurately. And part 2, HHHNG. That was delicious. Now I really wish to read a scene betwee Erik and Charles. Will you be writing more?
Re: Fill: Green Light, pt.2a_qSeptember 19 2011, 03:59:22 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting, I'm glad you liked it!
The OP wrote an excellent Erik/Charles scene on this, so I don't think I'm doing that... But this is my second Erik/Charles/Logan story, I was thinking writing something that connects them into a serie. I like writing this triad a lot.
Thank you so much!!!! aafgbjkgbw. This is hot and funny and so in character--love Charles's invitation to Erik and Logan's response, as well as Erik's relationship with Logan and the line about him being such a romantic!
You've actually inspired me to write the Charles/Erik version with Logan watching--I didn't think I could write for the prompt myself, but the world you created drew me in--hope that's OK!
You are very welcome! Loved this prompt since the first moment I saw it :) Glad to hear it was hot, I was afraid that it was too blah - no one barely takes their clothes off or anything (I have this tendency to keep everyone clothed, don't know what is up with that)
Of course you should write your own take, I shall go read your fic right now!
Re: Fill: Green Light, pt.2a_qSeptember 19 2011, 03:48:34 UTC
I can understand your pants! (...Uh, that came out wrong.)
I have wanted to write blood kink story with Logan, and when you add Erik with his knives, hm... That could work, yes. I have to see if the inspiration strikes on that one.
The tears did it.
Erik watched Logan with Charles, arms crossed and quiet, his eyes never leaving Charles. He contained himself through the whimpering, the begging and even out right screaming without patting an eyelash, but the moment Charles' bright blue eyes filled with tears, that was the moment he had to step in.
Logan was smacking Charles around, holding him steady with one hand and bitch slapping him with other. Logan hummed with pleasure, slaps getting louder on Charles sweaty, flushed skin. Without a warning there was tears, welling up and pouring down on Charles face and Erik moved before he could stop himself.
With a swift move he yanked Charles out of Logan's hold, which was easy because Logan hadn't expected Erik to intervene at this point. Why would he? Slapping was mild on Logan's scale of things. Charles seemed equally surprised from the sudden interruption, which made Erik feel even more tense and angry. Charles should've picked up his fear for his safety, but he hadn't.
“Hey! What are you doing? Hand him back!” Logan said, grabbing a hold of Charles arm. Charles hung awkwardly between them like a squeaky toy between two terriers.
“He is crying, back off!”
“Buddy, he always cries. It doesn't mean shit!”
Erik stared at Logan who stared right back, both willing the other to back down when it was clear that neither would. Charles sniffled, because he couldn't wipe his nose and the tears made it hard to breathe. He didn't say anything. Erik broke the staring contests and looked at Charles hanging in their hold, noticing how bright his eyes were, how he couldn't stop grinning. Anger flared in Erik's head, and he dropped his hold on Charles like his skin had suddenly turned hot.
“It doesn't mean anything,” Erik repeated, the realization dawning on him. He took a step back. “He really likes what you do to him.”
“Erik...”
“Lehnsherr...”
“Stop talking, both of you!” Erik said and turned his back to them. It felt like vertigo, the realization that he had understood this so fundamentally wrong. There was a sound of kissing behind his back and Erik glanced over his shoulder. They made a show for him, to placate him or to entice, he couldn't say.
“Wouldn't you like to join us?” Charles asked coyly.
“No.”
“Liar.”
Erik looked at Logan. "Your bitch called me a liar. You allow him to do that?"
"No, I don't," Logan said and nodded. "I'll see to it." The slap flung Charles to the floor at Erik's feet. He smiled up at Erik, before Logan grabbed his ankle and slid him back to him, picking him up like he weighted nothing and slapping him down again. "There. Remember your place. Something else you would like, Erik?"
"Make him cry again."
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I love the end of the first part, so funny, yet describes Erik/Logan relationship very accurately.
And part 2, HHHNG. That was delicious. Now I really wish to read a scene betwee Erik and Charles.
Will you be writing more?
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The OP wrote an excellent Erik/Charles scene on this, so I don't think I'm doing that... But this is my second Erik/Charles/Logan story, I was thinking writing something that connects them into a serie. I like writing this triad a lot.
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You've actually inspired me to write the Charles/Erik version with Logan watching--I didn't think I could write for the prompt myself, but the world you created drew me in--hope that's OK!
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Of course you should write your own take, I shall go read your fic right now!
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And more bitchslapping of Charles.
My pants are very demanding.
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I have wanted to write blood kink story with Logan, and when you add Erik with his knives, hm... That could work, yes.
I have to see if the inspiration strikes on that one.
Thank you for the comment, glad you liked it!
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My pants are glad to find such understanding.
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