Round 3

Aug 22, 2011 18:39

Welcome to Round 3 of X-Men First Kink

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prompt post, round 3

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girl Charles/Erik, hair pins or garter belt anonymous August 23 2011, 00:55:46 UTC
Erik wants to better his control and precision with small metal objects. As Charlotte happens to wear metal hair pins to keep her hair up or metal in her garter belt, he uses her to practice on, usually without her knowing.

At least not until her hair slips down from its bun or her stockings start sliding down her legs. Cue sexy times.

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Re: girl Charles/Erik, hair pins or garter belt anonymous August 23 2011, 06:02:38 UTC
If this gets filled I'll do a fanArt...this sounds g-dly *g*

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Re: girl Charles/Erik, hair pins or garter belt anonymous August 24 2011, 12:19:14 UTC
You've got time to warm your tablet -- I'm a slow writer -- but I'm absolutely writing this!

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A Delicate Fire 1/4 (Erik/female!Charles, NC-17, warnings : public sex) rubynye September 5 2011, 19:41:29 UTC
A/N: With thanks for inspiration to the author of Charlotte Francine XavierThe meeting is likely past halfway done when Charlotte feels her stocking retracting along her thigh. She shifts to trap it and fails, and it slithers down her leg, ticklish and annoying. The garter clip must have broken, but this set's nearly new; Charlotte wears skirts as rarely as she can manage, so perhaps it was defective and she didn't notice. At any rate, the broken stocking is distracting, and it's not as if Charlotte doesn't already know every word Moira is saying about the mutants they've found with Hank's machine and their plans to find more, when they rehearsed her report together and Charlotte provided the bulk of the information ( ... )

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A Delicate Fire 2/4 (Erik/female!Charles, NC-17, warnings : public sex) rubynye September 5 2011, 19:44:46 UTC
Then Erik kneels, and her breath catches as she glances over her shoulder, having to toss her head to swing her hair out of the way. "What are --!" Erik's hands cradle her calf, his touch warm and reverent as he bends, sliding the stocking down and kissing her ankle just above her shoe, and Charlotte trembles and has to shift her stance wider to keep her balance.

As she does, the other stocking slides down too, and Charlotte can't help laughing even as she points out, "This is a public stairwell, our rooms aren't that far away..."

Erik doesn't answer in words, but in his warm hands sliding up her leg, his heated mouth following with soft kisses, his amused conviction that she can keep them hidden, his thoughts beneath flickering with with don't care and can't wait and life is short, you make it sweet. His hands reach her hips, his mouth behind her knee, and Charlotte only realizes she's gasping when Erik stills, leaning his forehead behind her thigh, and murmurs, "Charlotte ( ... )

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A Delicate Fire 3/4 (Erik/female!Charles, NC-17, warnings : public sex) rubynye September 5 2011, 19:46:19 UTC
Forehead pressed to the wall, shuddering with pleasure, Charlotte desperately gropes for every mind in earshot, thinking, don't hear us, don't hear this, don't come down these stairs. To Erik she thinks, you magnificent wonderful bastard, and he chuckles richly into her, sending vibrations up through her, gulps a warm breath and keeps going. Charlotte's knees quiver, her nipples tingling inside her bra, and she bites her own fist as Erik's fingers bite warmly into her hips, as his mouth caresses her demandingly, his tongue flexing into her again and again until she pulses into another orgasm, crying out, "Erik, Erik."

Charlotte, he thinks, mental voice rich and echoing, Charlotte, I need -- and she sees in his mind his simultaneous desires, how he wants to hold her up and lick her until he comes from the sheer delight of bringing her pleasure -- I want -- how he aches to hilt himself inside her and clutch her to him -- I'm sorry --

Yes, Charlotte thinks as she gasps, "No," I want that, "It's all right, it's better--" I want you-- " ( ... )

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A Delicate Fire 4/4 (Erik/female!Charles, NC-17, warnings : public sex) rubynye September 5 2011, 19:47:28 UTC
I don't mind, she thinks, and he chuckles, sounding winded, and backs away just enough to disengage them before slumping against the wall, his arm draped around her waist. Charlotte tugs her crumpled skirt down her thighs and slumps back against Erik, her hair spilling everywhere. They're still completely dressed, tingling damply inside their clothes, and they are both utterly disheveled ( ... )

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OP Here anonymous September 5 2011, 20:05:39 UTC
This was incredibly hot, sensual and I loved the joy they both felt at being together.

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Re: OP Here rubynye September 6 2011, 05:08:56 UTC
I am very glad this pleased you! The prompt was utterly charming, and I really wanted to give them a moment of happiness, considering.

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Re: A Delicate Fire 4/4 (Erik/female!Charles, NC-17, warnings : public sex) anonymous September 6 2011, 17:34:05 UTC
This is incredibly HOT, I love what you did with the prompt. I'll start now doing some sketches and I hope one of them gets into something bigger, though I don't have the confidence to say that they'll be worth this fantastic piece

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Re: A Delicate Fire 4/4 (Erik/female!Charles, NC-17, warnings : public sex) rubynye September 6 2011, 21:25:27 UTC
Oh goodness, I am honored! The prompt is so gorgeous, and your offer of fanart is so generous, that I really wanted to write a story worthy of both.

*beams at you*

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Re: A Delicate Fire 4/4 (Erik/female!Charles, NC-17, warnings : public sex) anonymous September 8 2011, 02:51:10 UTC
Umm... yes please! God, this is exactly what I want from a gender-bend fic. LADY PLEASURE INVOLVING CLITS. I love the way you describe Erik's hands dancing over her thighs and butt. Charlotte's body heat shooting up. Brought back some vivid memories.

I also liked that you seemed to place subtle changes in how Erik treats this version of Charles (perhaps not though, I don't know how you see them in general)--that fear of being too rough, the audacity in pushing her early in the fic. And Charlotte's half-weary acceptance of both his interference and hesitancy. All of that spoke of the different gender dynamic.

Anyway, well done. Enjoyed this a great deal.

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Re: A Delicate Fire 4/4 (Erik/female!Charles, NC-17, warnings : public sex) rubynye September 9 2011, 16:36:26 UTC
Oh, your wonderful, meaty, perceptive comment made me do a happy dance. I really love writing and other verbs-ing oral sex; it can just be so lavishly, specifically, detailedly appreciative.

I also liked that you seemed to place subtle changes in how Erik treats this version of Charles

Hooray! They came through! Thank you especially for telling me so!

In general, I love genderswap; I love exploring the ramifications of one change, and that particular change fascinates me. Specifically, when I saw this prompt the first thing I did was go reread "Charlotte Francine Xavier", as that story has an awesome take on who a female Charles would be and how Erik would see her and treat her. I wrote this to delight in the porn but I tried hard to consider how Charles and Erik's relationship would change in places if Charles were Charlotte.

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Re: A Delicate Fire 4/4 (Erik/female!Charles, NC-17, warnings : public sex) alaceron September 8 2011, 09:03:49 UTC

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Re: A Delicate Fire 4/4 (Erik/female!Charles, NC-17, warnings : public sex) rubynye September 9 2011, 16:37:10 UTC
*beams*

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Re: A Delicate Fire 4/4 (Erik/female!Charles, NC-17, warnings : public sex) giandujakiss September 8 2011, 11:32:27 UTC
Heh - this was fantastic - not just hot but I loved the playfulness and the whole relationship.

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