Man is Evil, Man is Good (2/?)

[xmaspterodactyl]

Title: Man is Evil, Man is Good (2/?)
Author: Christmas Pterodactyl
Rating: R/NC-17/Mature for violence and sexual situations
Word count: Part 2: 7,931 words
Disclaimer: The author makes no claims of ownership to any material that may be recognized by the public.
Spoilers: Up to and including 3x05: Horror Fiction in Seven Spooky Steps
Summary:

Comments

[classicfreak]

Wow.
Um, yeah. Wow.
Annie pillaging the village just gave me a lot of feels, especially because she enjoyed it so much. The lady deserved it, and hope she died last so she could watch the destruction of the village at Annie's hand, and that the deaths of the villagers was her mind as Annie slowly killed her.
Perfect.
Annie subtlety seducing him with her lavish lifestyle, then her body was fantastic.

This is legitly what I love in the books I read; murder and sex.
*added to memories.*

[xmaspterodactyl]

Thinking of Alison on a killing spree is hard, because her vocalizations are at higher pitches and I haven't watched enough of her other roles recently to get her more serious parts in my head. But I also liked the idea of swift retribution followed by crushing guilt. Marta gets hers in the end, but I've said too much.

I'm glad you're enjoying it. I hope you like the rest.

[crittab]

This is so much better and more interesting than the story I'd cooked up in my head after the first chapter. Good god, Jeff and Annie are sexy together whether she's human or not.

So good. SO so good. I cannot wait for more.

[xmaspterodactyl]

I'd be interested in hearing what you cooked up. Mostly because I'd steal your ideas, but also morbid curiosity.

Glad you liked it. I had fun with the reveal...and totally dig Alison in that red bikini from the EW shoot. So much inspiration from that.

[crittab]

Man, my version was totally lame, and takes off of my completely off-base comment from the first chapter about Jeff getting shot and Annie turning him into a vampire to save him.

[xmaspterodactyl]

Most of the story is done save minor touch-ups. So I can't reveal anything. That was one idea I had for the scene in the diner. I threw it out because I wanted a human element. And Jeff as a vampire would be too easy. I'd fear for humanity if Winger was a blood sucker.

[x_avecia_x]

I'll admit it, I'm a sucker for a good vampire story. But this is even better than I'd dreamed.

All I have to say is HOLY SHIT I want more!

[xmaspterodactyl]

Thank you. I was hoping it wasn't too hackneyed. I love the plot. My biggest concern was if I could pull it off with my horrible writing style ( no pity party or fishing intended).

Oh, and I like to think it gets better.

[nyclove3]

[xmaspterodactyl]

I saw that bikini and my jaw dropped. It's a modified version because the tease is half the fun. Expect a few other outfits from publicity shots or past roles to make an appearance (except for Born and Hot Sluts).

[leigh198910]

Okay, I'm officially hooked. This is so much fun to read I can't wait to read more!

[xmaspterodactyl]

Ah but the first taste is free.

Glad you're enjoying it. It was a lot of fun to write. Just wait. It'll get better soon ( at least I think it will).