[fic; 30emo] Long Chain

[xmachina_writes]

Title: Long Chain
Chapter: completed fic, first in a cycle of ??
Author: Cross (xmachina_writes)
Band/Pairing: DBSK, ??x??xChangmin
30emotions Prompt: #11: Envy
Rating: PG-13?
Warnings: implied malexmale nudity
Word Count: 112
Summary: How the hell did he get himself into these things?
Comments: Very short (and possibly evil?) start to a long cycle of fics. Haven't

Comments

[theresa_lynne]

Definitely evil. :P

[xmachina_writes]

Apparently too evil - no one else has commented. >_>

[theresa_lynne]

You only need me, anyway. Because I am the coolest. Ha! ^^;;;

Maybe it was just too short. *kicks all members of the comm* READ THIS DAMMIT!!! :P

[cindelius]

Not too evil! It's nice, and I look forward to seeing where this cycle leads.

it was all Siwon's fault
Very intriguing. I haven't read many fics in which these two characters interact, so you have my attention. Okay, so I lied. You had my attention at the first line and especially at "Honey blond clinging to pale and black." That image conjures a nice contrast, showing warmth and coldness together.

Didn't stop him from envying the two sleeping so peacefully across the room.
I'm fairly sure that he's referring to another pre-established relationship here, like Ni~ya and Aoi's or Yunho and Jaejoong's in Feast of the Senses. Noting the string of thoughts, such as at least the one had noticed his absense, it strikes me that you do have a knack for writing outsider!Changmin, a boy insecure of his position in relationships and wanting reassurance that he's important and special while also wanting to appear mature and independent.

I'd love to have more of this when you're ready to post. And, I dunno, names would be slightly less

[xmachina_writes]

Well, the Siwon line is explained nicely in the very next fic, which I just posted tonight: Fanboy, so that part of the mystery doesn't last very long. XD

The rest of the mystery, however ... well, that's going to be a long time coming. This fic isn't exactly the end of the chain, but it's close to it. ^___^

[realitywaiting]

Ohhhh! Intrigueing! now i wann know what's going on!