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[fic] Unkept Secrets

Nov 05, 2007 19:36

title: Unkept Secrets
chapter: oneshot - Forbidden Desires #3
author: Cross (xmachina_writesrating: PG ( Read more... )

aoimin, niaoi, forbidden desires

Comments 5

theresa_lynne November 7 2007, 07:32:53 UTC

“Holy shit, Ni. We deflowered a pop idol.”

Ahahaha. That made me fall off my chair. I love that you continued this. More? <3

xmachina_writes December 4 2007, 22:44:59 UTC

Someday? I've gotten a bit distracted with everything on my plate, so while I have the next fic started, I have no idea when I'll get back to it so I can finish it. Plus all the 30emotions prompts.... *_*

part 1 cindelius November 11 2007, 10:56:14 UTC

Oh, I love you so, so much. As someone who loves the dynamics of the boys both in and out of relationships, and as someone who loves to see main characters through an outsider's perspective, this addition was exactly what I hoped to see (well, aside from all of the boys finding completion in each other's arms, happily OT3-5 after... hey. a girl can hope. :op your version of events was far more plausible and hit many of my kinks as a reader ( ... )

part 2 cindelius November 11 2007, 11:00:35 UTC

This nearly broke me, btw: For a brief moment, he half wished he could be the things Jaejoong needed but couldn't get from Yunho. He'd need someone to teach him, but he could learn to be the sort of sadist that Ni~ya was in scene. Except he doubted it would make Yunho feel any better about it. I'd so much like to see them try and for all three to be happy together (or to find an arrangement that works with Ni-ya and Aoi), but things are so fragile at the moment that it'd doubtlessly bring more trouble along, which you noted perfectly. It takes a lot of effort, shifting, trust, and personal struggles to have the sort of balanced relationship that that would require (something which might not make for a happy ending when all is said and done anyway). I melted at the implication that Changmin cares so much for Jaejoong and would be willing to go to great lengths to see him fully happy. Jaejoong's own effort to show that he cares for Changmin while still incorporating his new acceptance of Changmin as an adult is a very sweet thing ( ... )

Re: part 1 xmachina_writes December 4 2007, 23:12:24 UTC

As I noted in the post I just made, NaNo sort of ate me alive, so sorry for the extreme delay in getting back to your comments ( ... )