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Chapter Thirty-Five, "The Day Before the Thing"

Sep 17, 2009 00:44

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madmadmaddymad September 17 2009, 07:02:49 UTC

Woah! I'm first!

This never happens!

May I insist again that I love ABSOLUTLEY EVERYTHING YOU DO AND ARE. Christopher continues to be awesome, with the added bonus of Jessica's ability to plan for things that might actually constrain said awesomness. If I don't say so myself, they make a pretty unstoppable couple. :D

And Frig and Xlormp like to discuss salad. Which is adorable.

PS: I'll feel bad when Wemjox DOES get taken away. Klaxie is awfully attached to them. :(

nzanon September 17 2009, 09:45:06 UTC

After the meeting adjourned with Wemjox ordering us to spend the next few hours relaxing before our guests arrived,, S.P.I.T. gathered itself for a meeting.

Double commas are almost as good as darksecretspaces. They're like a doubly dramatic intersentencial pause!

Also, Jessica's logic is silly. Christopher doesn't need silly things like failsafe planning. She's much too badass.

a_respite September 17 2009, 11:59:43 UTC

Nametags were the awesomest way of showing "I'm so awesome, I don't even have to remember your names, little people," ever. And now this demon hell-spawn wants to bite that idea? And make Frigglekins wear one? Not cool, WemJox. Not cool.

lizren697 September 17 2009, 13:16:13 UTC

hehe. the salad conversation is excellent. almost as good as the penguin conversation.

deana_in_texas September 17 2009, 14:47:27 UTC

I guess the Jox part of wemjox has sort of taken a submissive role - I notice you're using the "he" pronoun now instead of "they"... Makes me think we're basically intended to forget it's a two-headed beast until suddenly Jox jumps in and does something unexpected to save the day! uh, or totally ruin it, but I hope not that :P