Chapter Four, "Returning Home After An Awesome Vacation"

Oct 20, 2008 11:05

The Most Second Book in the Whole Series

Chapter 4, "Returning Home After An Awesome Vacation"

[Author's note: As many people reading this story these days are not following along post by post, I have added the following four locales that were originally posted one at a time, in posts by themselves, to mimic Bella's depression months in New Moon. ( Read more... )

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lizren697 October 20 2008, 16:31:11 UTC
Beautiful. Just beautiful. I am mightily confused by the box creature, though.

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Hooray! meeszy_alexy October 20 2008, 16:37:53 UTC
Yay! GO LOU! He is win in hobo form.

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nightfalltwen October 20 2008, 16:43:50 UTC
But Jessica seemed confused by my invitation. "I'm confused by your invitation," she said.

Hee.

I love how Saskatchewan was on her list of exotic locals. *cackles* The flattest place that ever was flat.

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ex_c_hrista October 20 2008, 16:50:47 UTC
What do the posts with the places mean? I can't figure it out!

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nightfalltwen October 20 2008, 16:52:38 UTC
Those are the places Frig visited on her vacation.

They're mimicking the thing that Smeyer used it to avoid writing hard stuff did in the second twilight book after Edward left Bella and she couldn't cope so all it was, was chapters saying "January, February, March... etc etc..."

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ex_c_hrista October 20 2008, 16:53:32 UTC
Ohhhh. Thanks for explaining :D

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emeraldsorcha October 20 2008, 16:45:59 UTC
I could crush her spirit and use it to spice my spite stew.
That's just fucking awesome. I can't say anything else.

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ninjasushi October 20 2008, 16:57:11 UTC
A creature, tall and kind of boxy. Like it was made of boxes or something.

Hurr hurr hurr <3

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