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S89: Eventyr

Sep 02, 2015 18:51

Title: Eventyr
For: S89
Rating: PG
Length: 1125 words
Summary: He'd already said goodbye.
Warnings: very mild mentions of character death
Author's note: I went to the ocean and wrote this.

( Far out in the ocean, where the water is as blue as the prettiest cornflower, and as clear as crystal, it is very, very deep. . . )

#round 1, rating: pg

Comments 4

jinwann September 3 2015, 13:54:01 UTC

this was so beautifully written ;;;; i saw this prompt on the doc and i love the way it turned out. the descriptions of sehun as the wind were just gorgeous and the way sehun watched over minseok when he was prince as the wind was both heartbreaking but also sweet ;; it is a wonderful read and i really loved it ;3; <3333

naegastar September 4 2015, 01:01:35 UTC

This was so beautifully sad ;^; I'm so pleased that it seems their story may have a chance at a happy ending in this life.

nadinadara September 5 2015, 16:04:12 UTC

oh my... minseok is a reincarnation of the prince?
i hope sehun gets to find his own happiness this time round!
the way you describe his life... it was so bittersweet; watching over the townspeople but never was he truly happy ; - ;
i enjoyed reading this, thank you! <3

fairyminseok September 7 2015, 17:46:10 UTC

This is beautifully written and really engaging ;; I loved it!