Wavering Changes
Celia came over and we worked on the S.S. project. It took a long time,
but we finished the rough draft. I got a review on my Chobits
fanfiction, which really touched me. I didn't think someone was that
eager for the continuation of my story. I doubt I'll have time for a
long sitting so every time I update LJ, I'll try to write a paragraph.
Maybe my writing skills will improve this way...
hello! im suppose to be happy so i wont fire at you. DONT BE AFRAID!! now i really like your story. so pls try to write the next chapter faster. but if your discontinueing this story i will tell you that you have made the biggest mistake of readers of fanfiction net ever! now if i were to have flamed which i will not do because im nice, i would have told you that you need to speed up i have waited months for chapter 6 ! now i have to ask are you in high school university of college ? because i can understand about tests and all they are very important for your career. but if its like a trip of some kind of sickness or moving i will not flame. but if its something ridiculous then i will have to flame because of my contract or maybe becuz it seems unfair. we readers will wait for a good cause! but not for ridiculous ones got it ? and flame on the ones that flame at you in reveiws got it? we writers also take as much time to think and write these wonderful stories so you dont have to wati there on their behalf. so flame back if they flame at you. i will stand by you all the way and reveiw on new chapters. you will be in good hands wiht good friends. dark-kun might also support you.i will explain next chapter. you might fell mad but i will understand becuz authors have deadlines which can cause them to go crazy. so get mad ifk you wnat. but finish the whole message and think. got it? i want a friend not an enemy. so i will not flame at you no matter what the circumstances.
Wavering Changes - - - >
"Hibiya-san!" shouted the desperate man as he banged on the door. "Please help!" Holding the heavy persocom (or human?) on his back, he desperately rang the doorbell again. Ms. Hibiya had to be home! There was no one else to turn to. What's worse was Chi was growing heavy again, just like when she was in the trash. Panic filled him as he eagerly waited for the door to open.
Slowly, a creak escaped from the door as it was opened. Out stepped Freya, a somber and concerned look on her face. "Come in quickly."
hello! im suppose to be happy so i wont fire at you. DONT BE AFRAID!! now i really like your story. so pls try to write the next chapter faster. but if your discontinueing this story i will tell you that you have made the biggest mistake of readers of fanfiction net ever! now if i were to have flamed which i will not do because im nice, i would have told you that you need to speed up i have waited months for chapter 6 ! now i have to ask are you in high school university of college ? because i can understand about tests and all they are very important for your career. but if its like a trip of some kind of sickness or moving i will not flame. but if its something ridiculous then i will have to flame because of my contract or maybe becuz it seems unfair. we readers will wait for a good cause! but not for ridiculous ones got it ? and flame on the ones that flame at you in reveiws got it? we writers also take as much time to think and write these wonderful stories so you dont have to wati there on their behalf. so flame back if they flame at you. i will stand by you all the way and reveiw on new chapters. you will be in good hands wiht good friends. dark-kun might also support you.i will explain next chapter. you might fell mad but i will understand becuz authors have deadlines which can cause them to go crazy. so get mad ifk you wnat. but finish the whole message and think. got it? i want a friend not an enemy. so i will not flame at you no matter what the circumstances.
Wavering Changes - - - >
"Hibiya-san!" shouted the desperate man as he banged on the door. "Please help!" Holding the heavy persocom (or human?) on his back, he desperately rang the doorbell again. Ms. Hibiya had to be home! There was no one else to turn to. What's worse was Chi was growing heavy again, just like when she was in the trash. Panic filled him as he eagerly waited for the door to open.
Slowly, a creak escaped from the door as it was opened. Out stepped Freya, a somber and concerned look on her face. "Come in quickly."