Plans, Part Three

Jun 16, 2006 23:46

Here is the final, third chapter of Plans. I am already writing the sequel. As long as the world's best beta,
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_alicesprings June 17 2006, 07:42:44 UTC
omgomgomg

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xie_xie_xie June 17 2006, 07:44:06 UTC
Ummmm is that a good omgomgomg or a bad omgomgomg?

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_alicesprings June 17 2006, 07:48:58 UTC
Stupendous omgomgomg.

Uh, I seriously can't even leave feedback right now. There was so much here. And I so need that sequel too now. Um.

I'm gonna read it again and see if I can put into words how amazing this was.

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xie_xie_xie June 17 2006, 08:29:22 UTC
And I so need that sequel too now. Um.

Sheesh, I just posted this, don't I get a break at all?

Seriously, I secretly love being begged for more.

I guess that's not really a secret.

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_alicesprings June 17 2006, 08:45:17 UTC
Um, toppy Justin, hello! Wasn't expecting you, but that was very nice thank you.

I can’t even explain what it is about fucking him that makes me feel like I’m seventeen again, and totally in over my head.

My brain was mostly a pile of mush after that scene. But I soldiered on.

I felt like my heart was going to break open and pour over him.

Me too!

Even if Justin hadn’t already been sort of growing on me lately, the huge pot of coffee on the kitchen counter would have done it. I hoped Lindsay got him something really nice from us. I hoped he’d bought the coffee with extra caffeine. Just in case, I put double the sugar in mine. Hopefully the high would last long enough for Gus to tear into the four thousand seven hundred twelve presents Brian had put under, around, near, and within the general vicinity of the tree. This is why I keep saying: Not a total dick ( ... )

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xie_xie_xie June 17 2006, 08:47:52 UTC
I'm not sure which I liked better, toppy!Justin or him frying the fat-free bacon in butter.

I just love Justin.

Oh, and btw, when I sent the sex scene to gmta_nz to beta, she said you would love it. You're busted.

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_alicesprings June 17 2006, 08:57:54 UTC
fagfsdsdfsg! I thought no one knew of my secret lesbo sex fic kink? *blushes*

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xie_xie_xie June 17 2006, 09:02:37 UTC
LOL, no, toppy!Justin.

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_alicesprings June 17 2006, 09:07:40 UTC
*hides*

Busted. I got my comments all mixed up. But yes. Big fan of teh hot toppy!Justin, and also teh hot lesbo sex.

And did I mention teh hot toppy Justin???

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xie_xie_xie June 17 2006, 09:26:12 UTC
Do you really have a hot lesbo sex kink?

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_alicesprings June 17 2006, 09:43:02 UTC
Ohhhh, you thought I was kidding? Yep, that makes me sound less retarded. I was totally kidding! Ha.

Totally not kidding.

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xie_xie_xie June 17 2006, 10:03:04 UTC
Hmmm I like you more every day.

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_alicesprings June 17 2006, 11:01:11 UTC
Hee!

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but wait, there's more _alicesprings June 17 2006, 08:48:17 UTC
These are the kinds of things Brian does that confuse the hell out of me sometimes. You can practically beg for him to do something small, like take you out on your birthday or agree that yeah, you have some small degree of affection and commitment for each other, and he’s thrashing all over the place trying to get away or just looking at you like you’re insane. Like wanting to have breakfast in bed on your anniversary, if you had an anniversary, which of course you don’t, would be totally lesbianic. And then he’ll buy you a car. Or a house.

And that's why we you love him, Justin. Cos he's Brian fucking Kinney.

It went around like that for a while. Neither one of us is particularly good at getting the other one to change his mind. I got bored and gave in. He kept arguing for a little while before he noticed.

:D :D :D

So, we were sitting at the curb at the airport. Brian turned his head in my direction, his hands on the steering wheel. He tilted his head just a little and I felt my face just smile, totally without any decision on ( ... )

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eljays character limit sux _alicesprings June 17 2006, 08:49:51 UTC
He took the kiss. I let my mouth open just a little, and his tongue slipped inside. I opened my mouth more, and touched his tongue with mine, making my mouth soft and open and pliant. His breath changed and he suddenly stretched me out on my back on the sofa, lying on top of me and deepening the kiss, making my mouth open as far as it could, sucking on my tongue. His left hand was in my hair, and his right hand reached down inside my sweats and grabbed my thigh, pulling it up roughly and then slipping down and cradling my balls. He held them gently, then closed his hand just a little on them, and pressed his lips to the spot where my neck curves into my shoulder, where it always makes me crazy, and said, "Talk."

Fuck! Uh, I mean, carry on with your fine story. *whimper*

If I’d known that not talking was the best way to get Brian to talk, we’d have had this conversation years ago.

:D :D :D

And, finally!!!!!

I got up and walked over and stood right in front of him. I put my hands on his shoulders and tipped my head back so I could ( ... )

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Re: eljays character limit sux xie_xie_xie June 17 2006, 09:00:02 UTC
Where was teh hot lesbo sex? I wanna read it. I'll just pretend they're oother, non-annoying people.

Yeah... I wrote it, but cut it, even from the "optional" category, because there was no time in this story I felt Mel and Lindz would have had sex in the way I wrote it. It's a uh..... spanking!Lindsay scene. I originally wrote a scene in which Mel and Lindsay have a fairly intense confrontation in the bedroom, Melanie leaves to check on Jenny after the baby monitor makes mewling sounds, and comes back and Lindsay is pretending to be asleep to avoid continuing the discussion and Melanie shows her why she shouldn't pretend.

Oh dear, I'm getting ummm... hmmmm. I may need to go re-read that now.

I'm not entirely sure what I'll do with it, the next story is in the POV of Brian and Justin, no lesbians, so I'll either share it with anyone who wants some PWP about the girls, or save it for another future story. I don't want to decide tonight.

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