Plans, Part Two

[xie_xie_xie]

Plans, Part Two of Three.

Part One is here.

It has been made painfully clear to me that I live for feedback.

Thanks to the angel of beta-ness,

Comments

[epicallytired]

OMFG XIE.

you do some shit so well it's scary.

there's this

Like, someday I’m going to figure out why I thought that having a wife who was his number one fan wasn’t enough, I had to have his best friend be Jenny’s father. Serious lapse in judgment. Fucking maternal hormones.

when i can't stop laughing...and thinking...how the fuck can i like melanie. i don't like melanie, and now...i like melanie...wtf?

and this
And then just when he finished the twelfth, wishing there was a way to unsend them.

sometimes, when justin's "onto" brian... it's just so much fun to watch. you just know justin's right.

and then justin really knowing him
then he came back with some bullshit about the nature of time and the universe, I knew he’d started writing this as a tragedy. There wasn’t any point in arguing with him, so I didn’t. That’s the whole thing about the plan. I needed one, because normal stuff just doesn’t work with Brian.

and being smart and cool about it.

but he’s, you know, a comic book geek who can spend quality time with Gus without dumbing down his entertainment choices. I’m just saying.

and i'm always up for a little michael bashing.

I felt words boiling up inside me, important stuff like “I love you, I miss you, for fuck’s sake, can’t I come home?”

then you do something like THAT and i'm dealing with allergies here, must be, cause i don't snuffle over fic... i just...Do. Not.

brilliantly written...and the end, with brian sort of catching on, and recognizing that he's NOT just there for a good shower and a fuck...there's a plan.... love it.

oh, and the sex....guh worthy, but then when written well, when is b/j sex NOT guh worthy....

love it. really truly love it. and can't wait for part three which better be up soon because i'm breaking major rules about WIP's for you bitch.

have i mentioned i'm really really liking this. justin, and his pretty little plan.

oh, and brian drunk and stoned and hanging on justin while he's holding Jenny...domestic, sweet and not OOC.... hehehehe.

SUN but you've made me a sycophant.