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Plans
By Xie
My first fiction ... be gentle. This is part one, there will be three parts. They will come quickly. This story is told in alternating points of view, and one of them is somewhat unusual. I ask you to trust me. I promise it will be ok.
This is an angst-free zone. It is post-513 therapy for us all.
With many thanks to my hot Italian beta ( Read more... )
By Xie
My first fiction ... be gentle. This is part one, there will be three parts. They will come quickly. This story is told in alternating points of view, and one of them is somewhat unusual. I ask you to trust me. I promise it will be ok.
This is an angst-free zone. It is post-513 therapy for us all.
With many thanks to my hot Italian beta ( Read more... )
I really loved it. It was something about the rhythm and the organization of the story that seemed so fresh and new.
Although I am obsessed with B/J, I always love when the rest of canon characters are in the story. I never really minded Mel so much, and I love how the story is told through conversations with other people.
I love the blond conspiracy, and that Brian is sooo fucked.
It was so clever too- that the guy in the table ended up being Justin, the blank emails couldnt be more perfect, The Kinney Operating Manual- and clever Justin knowing exactly how to use it.
The biochemical neuro-transmitter nuclear reaction... so true. You captured the chemistry.
I could go on- but I must sleep.
I do want to make one more comment on how creative the lovemaking at the end was. The way it was written was really something new. It really made me feel something ,and see a little more deeply into their moments. ahhh.
Cant wait to read more.
*worships you*
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It was something about the rhythm and the organization of the story that seemed so fresh and new.
Thank you. Thank you for noticing, liking, and commenting. The organization almost escaped me more than once but my beta, gmta_nz, deserves all kinds of love for making me get control of it again. *sends love to New Zealand*
Although I am obsessed with B/J, I always love when the rest of canon characters are in the story.
Me too. It's harder to do than I expected, and in the next chapter I have more of them and I'm treading carefully with their voices. It's challenging.
I do want to make one more comment on how creative the lovemaking at the end was. The way it was written was really something new. It really made me feel something ,and see a little more deeply into their moments. ahhh.
Now you're just trying to kill me.
It's working.
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BTW, I have thought back to the blank email multiple times today.
How is it that less words are sometimes more?
One more thing- are you Chinese (asking because of your screen name)?
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No, you pronounce the "X" in my name the same way you pronounce the "X" in "Christmas." *G*
In other words, my name is Christie. Xie is just a nickname some people started calling me long ago. I used to have a hobby of arguing with anti-gay fundamentalists on AOL message boards, and me and the others on "my team" would often write "Xian" for "Christianity," because it was shorter and yeah, because it bugged them. Someone critized me for it, I said "Why is it any different than writing 'Merry Xmas,' do you get upset over that?" And then all the other gay people and liberals started replacing "Chris" or "Christ" in all words with an "X," and since my name was "Christie," I got it done like forty million times, and so I turned into "Xie."
So, not Chinese, just, you know, insane.
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In Chinese, Xie Xie means either thank you or diarrhea, depending on the inflections used.
Until now I assumed you were "Thank You"
:)
No I know.
Are you writing more yet?
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