Pulse Point, Chapter Two

Mar 27, 2007 10:54

This is the second chapter of Pulse Point, my AU in which Brian is a trauma surgeon and Justin is a paramedic - or as I will always think of it, mug!fic. Chapter One is here.

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Pulse Point, Chapter Two. If you click on this link and you're legally too young to read adult material, not even paramedic!Justin will be able to save you. )

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vlredreign March 27 2007, 18:15:23 UTC
I just love how Justin is calling Brian an asshole, and yet falls prey to the Kinney smile. Do you blame him?

Poor, sweet Gus. I was tearing up last night, reading about his chemo. It's so rough on little kids, especially when the meds don't work. And this:

I reached out to mess up his hair, before realizing he didn’t have any. I curved my hand around his head, and leaned down and kissed him. “You sure are.”

Oh! *whimpers*

But this made it all better:

I kissed him, and felt him giggle again. I raised an eyebrow ( ... )

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xie_xie_xie March 27 2007, 19:16:41 UTC
I just love how Justin is calling Brian an asshole, and yet falls prey to the Kinney smile. Do you blame him?

Not at all. ;)

I'm dying to find out what happened between Jen and Justin. And to see what's going to happen with Gus. On pins and needles here!

I hope the next chapter comes MUCH more quickly than this one did!

THANK YOU so much, my dear!

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cold_poet March 28 2007, 07:34:10 UTC
Absolutely amazing! I'm so glad to see another chapter - You've done a fantastic job with the characters, all of them. I can't wait to see more. *G*

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xie_xie_xie March 28 2007, 08:00:34 UTC
Awwww! Thank you so very much!

Xie

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eva213 March 27 2007, 18:20:00 UTC
Wow! I´m jumping of joy! I was scared that you wouldn´t continue.:-))

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xie_xie_xie March 27 2007, 19:15:20 UTC
I would never abandon this story! I promise!

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wordsalone March 27 2007, 18:20:06 UTC
Thank the lords of Kobol! *runs to read*

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xie_xie_xie March 27 2007, 19:14:55 UTC
ROFL!

I hope you like it!

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wordsalone March 28 2007, 18:58:39 UTC
I loved it! More please!!!

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xie_xie_xie March 27 2007, 19:14:27 UTC
It's been VERY interesting writing an AU.... really stretching my brain!

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jillapet March 27 2007, 18:54:54 UTC
Fuck-n-A this is a killer story!

And the last two sex scenes were incredibly hot, my love.

I demand that you do NOTHING ELSE but write this story!

*nods*

Seriously...I need to win the lottery so that I can start a fanfic writers commune. We'll sit around all day smoking hash and weaving flowers in each other's hair, whilst a couple of Brian Kinney and Xena lookalikes wander around nekked, serving us sangria and bon bons...and all you'll have to do is write write write!

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xie_xie_xie March 27 2007, 19:13:54 UTC
I demand that you do NOTHING ELSE but write this story!

From your mouth to the gay gods' ears!

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