Comments | xiahzart: commotions

xiahzart

commotions

Jun 18, 2010 02:03

title: commotions
pairings: yoosu ♥, yunjae, hint of OT5
rating: PG-13
4432 words.
ten random words and phrases given to me by irisu_chan and kj201 to which I've written rather lengthy drabbles. this is what I do when I'm studying for exams D:! normal fics coming when I actually have time to write o.o

( the house breathes like an ocean wind )

yunjae, drabble, yoosu, tvxq, changmin-centric, fic, pg-13, group, collection

Comments 13

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xiahzart June 18 2010, 11:05:03 UTC

thank you :) I'm sorry about the angst, it just kind of happened D:!

ting5 June 18 2010, 03:43:57 UTC

I've spot to read later ^^

ting5 June 18 2010, 07:43:10 UTC

Hehe bias or what not love all the Yoosu's <33
perfect's also one of my favs and for YunJae I really like the feel in 'to finally see you again' :)

Thanks for sharing this ^^

xiahzart June 18 2010, 11:04:08 UTC

thank you :3 I hadn't written any yunjae in a long time so personally I prefer the yoosu bits too ♥

thanks for reading!

ting5 June 18 2010, 12:50:16 UTC

No worries putting my bias aside your yunJae's sweet too :)

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xiahzart June 18 2010, 11:03:00 UTC

d' aww thanks babe :D it was a lot of fun trying to come up with something that fit those words. nevertheless, exciting! &hearts you too!

padmik June 18 2010, 17:48:50 UTC

/semi-long comment starto!

yunjae isn't an otp for me but goodness do i love some angst ;~; i was feeling the pain there, especially with 'to finally see you again'. you made me miss yunjae D; and i really loved 'shadow' since i can picture changmin with that kind of personality. he seems detached from everyone :(

aaannd hmm -searching, 'summer memories' is so DBSK XD i watched a lot of old videos of them a long time ago and i seriously believed that changmin thought jaesu were idiots, junsu thought yoomin were idiots, yoochun always blurted out stuff that got shot down, jaejoong always pointed out the obvious, and yunho would just laugh because he had nothing to say lol. it's so them; that's my favorite ♥

and my second favorite was 'blue door' because it gave me an indie feeling and i love that feeling. even with the underllying angst, i was smiling :)

as usual, i love your fics!

xiahzart June 18 2010, 21:13:59 UTC

aww thank you ♥. yunjae is kind of otp for me, but I must admit I haven't been able to write them or read much about them lately. yoosu has always had my priority D:

and I'm glad the summer drabble lived up to its purpose :) I wanted it to be lighthearted like that.

that indie feeling you're talking about; that's exactly the word I was looking for. I had nothing to describe it as, but now that I think on it, it is exactly like that.

bitingsu June 18 2010, 21:23:24 UTC

HOLY HOLY MMMM. I love these, really really do!!
Fairytale, homygoodness i- ... they're lovely ;;
Blue door had to be favorite, if i had to choose one. The line 'you can't be the one' ;-; that made it feel angsty and goodness i don't know, i love the realness of it... All of them are so easy to imagine actually happening... ♥ and i liked that you brought in recent things like fifa and bowling :D

A lot of these drabbles... i wish they'd be extended or made into a chaptered fic~~ But that's not to say they aren't perfect the way are, i just really enjoy the feelng/atmosphere i guess. :)
Anyways yeah i dig. 8)

xiahzart June 18 2010, 21:31:40 UTC

thank you so much! D: the angst slipped in once again, but I needed to add it for a touch of realism, I guess.

if only I had the time to sit down and write anything longer than this... but unfortunately, I have exams right now. no worries though, I'll be writing more lengthy stuff once those are over with.

♥ :D