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[xhalsanx]

seven am

Comments

[aboynamedkelly]

while your punctuation and grammar has definately deteriorated a bit, your story telling skills and writing style has definately improved. A-.

<3.

[xhalsanx]

damn fucking A minus. this is, as mike ness said so well, in that rockabliy voice i found so fucking hot when i was 17, the story of my life.

[aboynamedkelly]

you only lost points for technicalities. you just need to proofread a little better and you'll have that A in no time.

[xhalsanx]

do you think mike ness would take that shit as a response.

hell no he would punch a mirror with his make up on.

proofreading. the man was a musical genius.

you wanna tell him, or should i?

[aboynamedkelly]

mike ness is so old he probably wears diapers. mike ness also has been able to write a decent song since the mid 90's.

i'll let you tell him both those things, as well as the bit about proofreading, though.