Thats just about perfect. I think i might change a few lines just a little bit if thats cool with you. Why did you have to say for Sarah L.? Why not just say here you go sarah?
I have other friends named sarah i wanted to make sure they didn't think i was writing it about them.... you can change lines i just wanna see what you come up with as the final, there are a few lines i wanted to change also but couldn't think of how i wanted em
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