If anyone wants to read part 2 of this story, you may view it at:
http://www.livejournal.com/3445.html#cutid1(I hope.) Comments both positive and negative are welcomed. I know there must be a way to repost this here directly but I have not yet figured that out. And I believe I have now opened the first part of the story to public viewing. Oh - the second part is even less work friendly. And no minors, please.