> Secrets of Blood (7 of 25)

[xennie_b]

Title - Secrets of Blood - Part 7 of 25
Author - xennie_b Characters/Pairings - Jack/Ianto, Gwen, Tosh, Owen
Rating - M15+
Warnings - Blood, Language, Sexual References
Spoilers -  Season one from Countryside to End of Days
Summary - After their outing to the countryside Ianto's forced to go through some major changes. Physically, mentally and

Comments

[kickair8p]

Your lj-cut isn't cutting, and is this chapter 6 or 7?

Aside from that though, nice chapter! I like where you're taking this.

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[xennie_b]

Bloody hell, that was quick.
I'd thrown it up but hadn't finished the final edit and tweak yet and you'd already found and read it. Wow.
Thank though, I'm glad you liked the chapter, it's got a little bit more added throughout it now, but not enough to really worry about.
I'm not sure what you mean about the cutting though?

[xennie_b]

Oh Yeah the chapter thing...
This is chapter six, there are six chapter and a prologue (seven parts)
The counter at the top and in the headings includes the Prologue, so people don't get mistaken and start reading from chapter one.

[myshka23]

Yay new chapter. Love how you worked in the Tosh-Mary storyline. As always, can't wait to read more :)

[xennie_b]

Wow that was quick, I'd chucked it up on my LJ but was still doing a final edit an tweak, so I apologize if some parts didn't read well, it's finished now though.
I'm glad you liked it anyway and the next part will hopefully be up in a few days.

[thrace_adams]

Found it!!! Ahh it was Mary...that's what was wrong with Tosh. And Jack's letting him use his room! AWWWW. I just love how good Jack is being about this whole thing! Man, I can't wait to see what Ianto's going to do with Tosh! LOL loved the descriptions of why he couldn't keep blood anywhere :)

[xennie_b]

Glad you found it. I think you still managed to beat me with reading it before it was edited but that's cool, I'm glad you like it. Hopefully I'll get the next part up in a few days.

[thrace_adams]

Cool! Looking forward to it :)

[riotangelstar]

just read all the chapters. I love it! Can't wait for more! :)

[xennie_b]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, the next part will hopefully be along in the next day or so.

[xennie_b]

Thanks, i'm glad it worked lacing the episode snippets into the story, i wanted it to run parrallel with the series. At first i wasn't sure how to do it as i didn't want it to become boring with me retelling things, so i was hoping this approach might work instead.